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tragic love story

tragic love story

Creative Created on 8-10-07 Views(40) Story Rating G

Coming home from work i hear the phone ring, im to tired to answer.I Lie down and close my eyes, cant believe wat i see. I see u. Havent seen u in a long time. I asked wat hav u been doin, where have u been? Still not believing its really u. U keep quiet, starting to walk away u turn around and smile. Come back wait i wanna talk to u! Ur to far off now, i start to run and finnally catch up to u. Grabbed ur hand but it went right through. She looked and got sorta sad and kept walking ignoring all the questions i was asking her. Where we goin? No word comes out. Then we stopped, i look around and see we have stopped in a grave yard, infront of me i see a headstone. Cant believe my eyes its ur my love, I,I,I dont understand why ur name? This cant be true i love u too much for this to have happened. You finally let it all out...You where right. I was right wat? I love u and u loved me but we were to different then. We where in 2 different places. U told me I needed help but i was ignorant. Tou told me to leave dat guy, but I didnt listen. I didnt listen my love and I am sorry for that, but dont feel sorry for me because i am finally free. I dont feel anymore pain, I dont feel anymore sorrow. I dont feel any kind of pressure. I am free. I love u my love and i always wil. No I said this cant be true this isnt true. Your not really gone I love u too much for u to have gone from our side. How will I go on without u? But u will, Ill be here with u the whole time. I will watch over you. I love u my love and i always will but i have to go now. Gives me 1 last kiss And dissapears. I wake up they way i wake up wen i have nightmares. I had to call her. She doesnt answer. I tried again and her mom picked up.I asked to speak with her wen she broke out in tears. Wats wrong? Her mom said she died just last night. I was shocked i asked wat happened. She said that guy finally beat her for the last time. Doctor said she just couldnt handle any mroe hits to her body. She wrote you a letter  and told me to give it to u the same night she left us. I go over and pick it up, her mom recieves me with a hug of loneliness. The letter had the same smell of her. I opened it and it said, "Hi my love if u are reading this i am no longer on this Earth. I just want tou to know that i love u and i always will. I wish things could had been different between us, but we we where in 2 different places. I will be there with u and for u. Dont worry my love I no longer feel pain, I no longer feel sorrow. I no longer get any pressure. I am always goin to watch u my love. Please dont feel bad for me because I am finally free. I love you and i always will." I start to cry. I told her mother i had this same dream just last night and she said the same thing she wrote on the letter. Her mom said the last person she tried calling was me, and she really did love me but she couldnt leave him for some reason. Her mom said she left him but she left us to. Dont worry shes not gone shes here with us she told me. She is watching over us and she is finnally happy. She hugged me and she cried. I told her Ill come visit her  and Im always here for her. I know it hurts me to but she is finally free. and she would want us to be happy for her. I leave and go home. Lay down alone but i feel som1 laying next to me, i coudnt see her but i knew it was her.. I love you my love and I always will. I am glad ur finally free, I Will Be With You One Of These Days Again, Until Then My Love Night Night And Pleasant Dreams

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On August 10th 2007 Jacquelyn2008 Said :
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yea that was sad
On August 10th 2007 Jacquelyn2008 Said :
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yea that was sad