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The Ghost in my Dream (part two)
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No. Not until you hear my story will you sleep. She told me calmly. Something in the way she spoke made me shiver. I remained quiet. Not even daring the soft sound of breathing. I lit a candle and looked around. All seemed normal again. My curtains were white. Not blue like before. The desk was gone, and my journal remained as it had before I lost myself in my heavy slumber.
I let out a sigh of relief, and still shaking climbed into my bed again. I lay there just staring at the flickering of the candle. I pulled my blanket over my head and turned on my side. I let my tired mind give in finally and fell asleep. I heard someone again. I was trying to open my eyes, but couldn't.
"Shh!" "She's awake!" I heard the male voice. Deep, soothing, yet eery. I opened my eyes and saw him. He was under my blanket. Red bloody cuts streaming down his face. He was so pail and whispy. I tried to scream, and I choked on it. His eyes were wide, never blinking. I looked into his black eyes unable to look away.
"Get her!" The girl. She sounded so evil. "Make her go with you! Take her so she knows!!!" She was screaming at him. I was still locked in his eyes. They were deep pools I couldn't comprehend in the least. No feeling. Just empty. No soul? Maybe. He grabbed onto me tightly. I was breathless. He was taking my air! I felt his chest stiffen. He pulled me closer and closer to him. I heard the girl laughing, and the wind swirling around my room. More tighnening. Untill... I woke up in a new world...
(to be continued, if anyone cares to read more)
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| On May 3rd 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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wonderful... I really like this!
You're great! ;] |
| On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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I love it... off to read the next part! =) |
| On April 13th 2008 counterpart Said : | |
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love it! |
| On March 30th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 30th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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well with the second half of the story it may make more sense weird how that work huh...lol very nice |
| On March 29th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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love it... Kmp |
| On March 29th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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ahhh omg kmp yo |
| On March 29th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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i like it! kmp |
| On March 29th 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said : | |
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deff writ more im loveign this and iv never read a story liekt his on here bf its wicked kool |
| On March 29th 2008 lovesweeney4ev Said : | |
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kmp, i hope u write more!!!! |
| On March 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I know dude~ It's kind-of scary. I'm not sure if I should keep it that way. I kind-of want to though. I have a very vivid Pisces moon imagination~ (not that many know what that means) but still... lol |
| On March 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's wonderful gruesome but cool! Nice work! |
| On March 29th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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love it.kmp |
| On March 28th 2008 toxxicskank Said : | |
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i like this, its different but very well written!! |
| On March 28th 2008 dangg101 Said : | |
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Kmp please i love this story,yea its a little bit creepy but its VERY WELL WRITTEN!! |
| On March 28th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Hell yeah, good so far definitely KMP!! |
| On March 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I know it's really short. Sorry. I'm just testing this still~ So tell me what you think. It's a new form of writing for me. |


