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The ghost in my dream...

Other Created on 3-20-08 Views(214) Story Rating G

    I lay in my bed last night. It was 1:30 a.m. I was searching for my journal pen, wanting to write my way to sleep, but couldn't find it. I am very picky about the color pattern of my journal, and today I needed my pink pen. I decided to meditate my way to sleep. 

I snuggled my blanket in the dark, not wanting to wake Ty up. (My other half of five years) I thought up images of sunsets, and flowers, beaches, anything to relax me...

 

    I heard someone in my room. Someone not from this side of life. A dark presence.  My name was being called eerily~" Ashleeyyy come herree. LISTEN!!" The voice was raspy. It was  Evil. A girl? I looked around my room. Everything was different. I didn't have a mirror there before. I felt crazy, more scared though. I stared at the mirror. It was foggy. There were words traced along the fog. The hand-writing matched my own. Although a little different. I knew I didn't write those words. I peered closer but couldn't make them out, or even understand. 

     Laughter. More like cackling. "ha! Stop looking in the mirror so long Ashley! You're not quite as lovely as you think you are!" She hissed evily. I turned around in a flash. I felt her. I couldn't see her anywhere. I was shaking now. I didn't dare respond. I didn't want to talk to her. I wanted to wish her away...

    She left me alone for a while. I was relieved. I made my way back to sleep, trembling. All was dark. Everything quiet. Then... My journal! What was she doing with it! She was reading it loudly. Mocking me. I sat up frantically. I still couldn't see her. I saw my journal. The pages flipping loudly~ back and forth~ back and fourth on a desk. It wasn't my desk!!

 

    "What are you doing!? Leave me alone!" I demanded weakly. More hissing. More laughter. "Poor Ashhley" She mocked. I saw my curtains moving. My window wasn't open. Those weren't my curtains. Mine weren't blue. I started to cry. Covering my ears. I felt her behind me. I was scared of her darkness. She was evil. I hated her! I couldn't see her, but I could feel she was tall. Taller than I was. I could feel her behind me. Silent. She wanted to hurt me. I could feel that mostly. 

     "I'm just dreaming. You don't scare me!" I told her hotly. This made her mad. Everything grew windy. She was screaming. She sounded like a dying snake. "No. Not until you here my story, will you wake up. She demanded...

(to be continued) 

Note~ this will only be a couple parts long. 

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On October 29th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Wow good as always
On April 14th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute Wow really interesting!
On April 13th 2008 counterpart Said :
counterpart ooh good so far!
On April 8th 2008 sageravens Said :
sageravens Cool beans Ashley. I like it much.
On March 29th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 Interesting!!!WHY DIDNT ANYONE TELL ME ABOUT THIS!?lol anyways,very interesting I like.MORE!!=D
On March 25th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 o0o0o kmp yo this is interesting
On March 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 kmp! Love it Ash!
On March 21st 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 wow this is realy cool have to see a story like this on this site i love it. ur a great writer keep it up and keep me posted pleas and thank you
On March 21st 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone I want some of what ever it is you been smoking girl...that's the good shyt huh? lol...for realness tho this is a trip I like it already.
On March 21st 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 scarey!! Love it tho... Kmp
On March 21st 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 :] Very creative! I really like it! Great job! You are an excellent writer!
On March 21st 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very good so far, keep it going!!
On March 20th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s wow...if you write more let me know!
On March 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is very creative! What on earth was Ty doing sleeping away! How can he sleep with you screaming? LOL. Aw it's just a story! KMP :)