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Drama Created on 3-10-08 Views(240) Story Rating G

     I woke up to water drops on my face. I moved slightly and heard my sister asking me if I was all right. I nodded lightly. "Yes Nicole I'm fine." My voice sounded far away, like I was speaking from another place. I lay there trembling. My sister helped me up, and out of the bathroom, practically carrying me the entire way. "I'm just tired, I'm soo tired." I said emotionless.

 

    My sister led me on to my bedroom, where she helped me onto my bed pulling the blankets to my chin. I looked at her face, and noticed how solemn she looked. Her cheeks had tear stains and her eyes were red. I couldn't tell but it looked as though my sister was frightened. I then realized the whole house seemed dead quiet.

 

    As if she could hear my thoughts, she explained how Mom took Jessica shopping with her. I sighed in relief. "Nikki, you can't tell Mom! Please don't. I'll do anything! I'll decorate your room, and you can wear any outfit of mine to school." I pleaded in desperation. She just walked out of my room. "Wait! What are you doing? Where are you going?" I called after her but she didn't reply.

I listened holding my breath, to be sure she wasn't calling anyone. Her and Jessica's Dad. My Mom. Or even worst the hospital. I listened for a sign, but only heard dishes clanking in the kitchen.

   My brain was completely exhausted. I needed sleep. I closed my eyes, and sunk deeper into my bed. 

    I was

    Sinking...

    I saw images of Jenny and her diet coke

    The bathroom scale 

    Sinking...

    I saw my eyes

    I saw the girl from the mall

    She was getting further away from me

    She became skinnier and skinner

    Until she looked like a skeleton

    her eyes were the same

    big and haunted and full of warning

    She was screaming something I couldn't hear

    I tried getting closer but she just went further away

    until I couldn't see her at all.

    Then there was only black.

     

 (to be continued)

 

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On March 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Hmm, amazinggg.
On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Damn, I guess I didn't, very good, I thought I comment it when I read it
On March 11th 2008 hippppoo101 Said :
hippppoo101 kmp plz i love it and its good dont stp here u need to keep going on with this story plzz
On March 11th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Should I even continue~ I'm discouraged already, and losing some fans... *tear* Maybe a conclusion? Then back to poetry? sighes
On March 11th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I didn't know you wrote a new chapter! lol I was just going threw profiles! Anyway....I loves it! Kmp
On March 11th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 love it kmp
On March 11th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute I absolutely LOVE your writing!
On March 10th 2008 Thuggishone Said :
Thuggishone nice...me thinks this story is longggggggg...lol...and me hates reding as it is but me reading me ass off....lol...keep me posted
On March 10th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 I like the way you wrote the dream section it really had my heart pounding lol I love it kmp
On March 10th 2008 y0i5op Said :
my picture
I hope she realizes that she really could die from anorexia. kmpplz
On March 10th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s aww wow. kmp!
On March 10th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 wow! this story is so good! please kmp
On March 10th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 *eyes widen* KMP! KMP! KMP! KMP!
On March 10th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll hmm... if you're going to leave a point, please leave a comment! thanks~
On March 10th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 *speechless just staires* kmp plz
On March 10th 2008 xxhXcxx221 Said :
xxhXcxx221 This is such a good story. kmp please.