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Anorexic Neighborhood (part ten)
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I woke up to water drops on my face. I moved slightly and heard my sister asking me if I was all right. I nodded lightly. "Yes Nicole I'm fine." My voice sounded far away, like I was speaking from another place. I lay there trembling. My sister helped me up, and out of the bathroom, practically carrying me the entire way. "I'm just tired, I'm soo tired." I said emotionless.
My sister led me on to my bedroom, where she helped me onto my bed pulling the blankets to my chin. I looked at her face, and noticed how solemn she looked. Her cheeks had tear stains and her eyes were red. I couldn't tell but it looked as though my sister was frightened. I then realized the whole house seemed dead quiet.
As if she could hear my thoughts, she explained how Mom took Jessica shopping with her. I sighed in relief. "Nikki, you can't tell Mom! Please don't. I'll do anything! I'll decorate your room, and you can wear any outfit of mine to school." I pleaded in desperation. She just walked out of my room. "Wait! What are you doing? Where are you going?" I called after her but she didn't reply.
I listened holding my breath, to be sure she wasn't calling anyone. Her and Jessica's Dad. My Mom. Or even worst the hospital. I listened for a sign, but only heard dishes clanking in the kitchen.
My brain was completely exhausted. I needed sleep. I closed my eyes, and sunk deeper into my bed.
I was
Sinking...
I saw images of Jenny and her diet coke
The bathroom scale
Sinking...
I saw my eyes
I saw the girl from the mall
She was getting further away from me
She became skinnier and skinner
Until she looked like a skeleton
her eyes were the same
big and haunted and full of warning
She was screaming something I couldn't hear
I tried getting closer but she just went further away
until I couldn't see her at all.
Then there was only black.
(to be continued)
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| On March 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Hmm, amazinggg. |
| On March 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Damn, I guess I didn't, very good, I thought I comment it when I read it |
| On March 11th 2008 hippppoo101 Said : | |
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kmp plz i love it and its good dont stp here u need to keep going on with this story plzz |
| On March 11th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Should I even continue~ I'm discouraged already, and losing some fans... *tear* Maybe a conclusion? Then back to poetry? sighes |
| On March 11th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I didn't know you wrote a new chapter! lol I was just going threw profiles! Anyway....I loves it! Kmp |
| On March 11th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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love it kmp |
| On March 11th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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I absolutely LOVE your writing! |
| On March 10th 2008 Thuggishone Said : | |
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nice...me thinks this story is longggggggg...lol...and me hates reding as it is but me reading me ass off....lol...keep me posted |
| On March 10th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I like the way you wrote the dream section it really had my heart pounding lol I love it kmp |
| On March 10th 2008 y0i5op Said : | |
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I hope she realizes that she really could die from anorexia. kmpplz |
| On March 10th 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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aww wow. kmp! |
| On March 10th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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wow! this story is so good! please kmp |
| On March 10th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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*eyes widen* KMP! KMP! KMP! KMP! |
| On March 10th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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hmm... if you're going to leave a point, please leave a comment! thanks~ |
| On March 10th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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*speechless just staires* kmp plz |
| On March 10th 2008 xxhXcxx221 Said : | |
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This is such a good story. kmp please. |


