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The Perfect Couple

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 It was junior year in high school when Cynthia first laid her eyes on Mike. They never really hanged out in school or after school, but when they did pass each other or see each other they would take about a minute to look at each other, and then hurry up and leave before anyone saw. When it came to senior year they still would stare at each other for no reason. When graduation came Cynthia and Mike never saw each other until one day about seven years later. They talked for hours on the phone and became best friends. But Mike didn’t tell her about one of his deepest secrets. He finally got the nerve to talk to her about it. He told her that he found out that he got a heart disease a long time ago, but he never got the nerve to be able to tell anyone. She was kind of unsure about it at first but she accepted it.  They both fell in love but they never told any one. They didn’t even go out or anything. Cynthia got tired of waiting around for Mike to ask her out, so she found a guy and married him. When Mike got an invite to there wedding he died inside. Mike and Cynthia became best friends more than what they were, but they both loved each other but they wouldn’t tell each other. So Cynthia couldn’t take it any more she loved Mike so much she couldn’t hide it any more. She got a divorce with her husband just for Mike. When she went to go see Mike a women answered the door and she found out that Mike had gotten married. Cynthia was heart broken. She went back to her house and cried her self to sleep.  Two weeks went by and Mike went to Cynthia’s house and told her he loved her and he got a divorce with his wife so he could be with her. Two years went by and they got married.  Three days after their honeymoon the doctors told Mike he only had one week to live. Cynthia and Mike did everything together. The spent as much time as they could together. They went out to dinner they went to the movies. They did stuff that made them cuddle with each other and laugh together.  Then when it came to the last day of the week Mike had, they fell asleep together holding each other. When Cynthia woke up she saw Mike sitting up in bed alive! They went to the hospital and they took more tests on Mike. They came back and told Cynthia and Mike that Mike could live a full life as long as he kept fighting and wouldn’t give up. They were both so happy. They went and celebrated by a candle lit dinner. They were having the greatest life until two years later. Mike was doing so well with his heart disease.  Mike had passed away from an abscess tooth and went into a coma and never woke up. Cynthia cried her eyes out for months. All of a sudden she started to not feel good. Her friends kept asking her if she was pregnant. She would always say no until one day. One day she became curious so she got a pregnancy test and it came up positive. She was pregnant. The father was Mike! When she got far enough along to be able to see the gender she was so excited to see what it was. It was a boy! She was having a baby boy.  

When she had her baby boy she named him Charlie. Charlie always looked like Mike but when Charlie turned 6 he became to really get mike’s features in his face. Whenever Cynthia looked at Charlie she would always see Mike. When Charlie became old enough to wonder about his dad. He started to ask questions about his dad and his mom. His mom just said they were The Perfect Couple.

By: D.C.

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On July 11th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow thats good
On January 12th 2008 CrazyGirlz25 Said :
CrazyGirlz25 aaaawwww!!! so beautiful
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On January 12th 2008 LizWinker93 Said :
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On January 12th 2008 AshleyAE44 Said :
AshleyAE44 Beautiful story line.
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