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life from another side. chapter one

Tragedy Created on 3-29-08 Views(91) Story Rating G

Chapter 1

It was like any other day, the sun pooling through the window , the smell of my mom cooking pancakes and bacon.

I rolled over to meet your embrace, and to see your face but you werent there, I for got that you wouldent be there any more, that you were gone. And it came again, the pain, the lonely ness. I came to this pain ever time I thought of you, after five minutes of this feeling the numbness came and I felt like the time came to a stand still.

“ Eliza, breakfast is- Eliza are you okay, what’s a mater?” she walked in through the door and sat on the bed be side me. I started to cry.

“ he’s.. He’s gone , Alex is gone.” and then came the numbness.

“ shhh, shhh its ok, he’s in a better place now, and he’s watching over you. Shhh, shhh.” she rocked me back and forth rubbing my back and telling me its okay.

When I was done staining my moms shirt, “ so you coming for breakfast?”

“ yeah, just give me a few minutes.”

 

 

 

editor note. if you want mor could you rate and commont please. thanks

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On May 23rd 2008 wowjessiie Said :
wowjessiie it sounds sad, yet good. kmp please
On March 29th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :
Crazycutie7 kmp
On March 29th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :
xxXrareloveXx i like it. kmp
On March 29th 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 I like it. And I don't think you need any tips, cause it sounds really good. Anyway plz kmp!
On March 29th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said :
XxStormyEyesxX job, not fob, sry!!!
On March 29th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said :
XxStormyEyesxX i love it so far, i don't wanna give you any tips cuz I have a feeling that you can do a better fob, but maybe she could find a journal that he kept??? idk plz kmp tho!!
On March 29th 2008 shitzmay Said :
shitzmay if you like this could you give me some tips, thanks
On March 29th 2008 shitzmay Said :
shitzmay if you like this could you give me some tips, thanks