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life from another side. chapter one
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Chapter 1
It was like any other day, the sun pooling through the window , the smell of my mom cooking pancakes and bacon.
I rolled over to meet your embrace, and to see your face but you werent there, I for got that you wouldent be there any more, that you were gone. And it came again, the pain, the lonely ness. I came to this pain ever time I thought of you, after five minutes of this feeling the numbness came and I felt like the time came to a stand still.
“ Eliza, breakfast is- Eliza are you okay, what’s a mater?” she walked in through the door and sat on the bed be side me. I started to cry.
“ he’s.. He’s gone , Alex is gone.” and then came the numbness.
“ shhh, shhh its ok, he’s in a better place now, and he’s watching over you. Shhh, shhh.” she rocked me back and forth rubbing my back and telling me its okay.
When I was done staining my moms shirt, “ so you coming for breakfast?”
“ yeah, just give me a few minutes.”
editor note. if you want mor could you rate and commont please. thanks
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| On May 23rd 2008 wowjessiie Said : | |
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it sounds sad, yet good. kmp please |
| On March 29th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 29th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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i like it. kmp |
| On March 29th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I like it. And I don't think you need any tips, cause it sounds really good. Anyway plz kmp! |
| On March 29th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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job, not fob, sry!!! |
| On March 29th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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i love it so far, i don't wanna give you any tips cuz I have a feeling that you can do a better fob, but maybe she could find a journal that he kept??? idk plz kmp tho!! |
| On March 29th 2008 shitzmay Said : | |
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if you like this could you give me some tips, thanks
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| On March 29th 2008 shitzmay Said : | |
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if you like this could you give me some tips, thanks
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