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just anoyher person with a big secret. (chapter 1)
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I stood there by the window and watched the Evening crept slowly into the sky as the moon sank low over the restless city. Then I took a cold bath, got dressed. But this morning on the way out to grab breakfast, something was different, I couldn’t tell what it was until I walked out the door, across the hall the was a human sitting by the door, looking exhausted, almost past out. He looked like he was waiting for something. Was he waiting for something, or someone? So I decided to just leave, but something told me to help him. As I stood there waiting for the elevator, I started thinking if I should help him or not.
No-He could be a creep.
Yes- I could take him, after all I’m ten times stronger
No- I haven’t ate in a long and he smelt delicious.
Yes- he was so cute, brown shaggy hair, blue eyes.
when the elevator finally came around I decided to screw it and help him. So I started down the hall. , but every time I got closer my through started to burn, and my mouth was over flowing with venom, from the smell of him , it was usal because iv waited so long to eat.
“umm…. Sir are you ok? Sir?”
“ huh?…what, oh!” he looked freighted. A smile kind of played around the edges of my mouth.
“oh, sorry if I scared you. I just saw you there and was wondering if you were ok….”
He just sat there looking dazed. Kind of Stupid. “um…Yea I’m ok. I locked my self out.” then he started to chuckle. I couldn’t help but laughing to. But his breath took me by surprise, so sweet!
“you know you could have went and got the super attendant.”
“I know.”
He started to stand up, when he stood up a big whoosh of air towered me, it hit me like a train. It hurt so bad. I’ve never had any thing happen to me like this. What’s happening? I could usually keep it under control, but this was ten times worse. It was the sweetest blood I‘ve ever smelt, for over 175 years.
It made a big burning sensation shake through my entire body. I shuddered. It hurt, a lot!
Then I started to imagine what the warm blood would have tasted like flowing, swarming in to my mouth, satisfying every bit of the tingles in body…
“ um, I have to go.” I had to get out of there.
“ no. wait, I haven’t got your name.”
“ Victoria. Bye.” I started down the hall again, he yelled after me but I just kept walking. When I got to the elevator it seemed to never come. Out over my puerperal vision I saw him jog towered me, I pushed the button again. It didn’t come so I ran a crossed the hall, and went down the fire escape. I could hear his quickened heart beets, and deep breaths as he ran down the stairs after me. I don’t know why I kept running, I’m the predator, and he was the prey, he should have been running from me ME!
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| On April 4th 2008 IVMayhem Said : | |
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i LOVE it ^_^ |
| On March 29th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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sounds great, kmpp!!!! |
| On March 29th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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hummm this is good! i like it |
| On March 27th 2008 powerfulone Said : | |
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sounds good really, kmp! |
| On February 23rd 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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Intresting, u gotta keep me posted! |


