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Sacred Legends: Ch. 3 part 1
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After a week of traveling Theo, and Brittnee finally reached the Entrance to Karkoia Forest. The instant they walked into Karkoia Territory a group of Karkoia Warriors surprised them. One of the karkoia realized Theo, and said Theo you have returned with this person.
Theo replied "Takura is that you"
Brittnee asked Theo"You know these Karkoia"
Theo replied "These are the Karkoia I grew up with"
Right then the Karkoia let their guard down, and Takura said "Theo sorry for that it is just that ever since the temple was attacked we have had to protect the forest"
Brittnee quickly said "We may be to late That guy might have the Jewel"
Takura said "You mean the Jukuri Emerald"
Brittne looked at Theo with a astound look, and said "Jukuri Emerald"
Theo replied "The Jukuri Emerald is the Karkoia sacred Jewel it is what gives them the power they have, I got blessed by Vita and the Jewel while I was growing up myself. Without that jewel the Karkoia forest would be unable to hide the Karkoia to anyone but a member of any Royal Family the same with the other Jewels. Why do you think no one was able to find me or the Karkoia all those years ago."
Takura asked "Are you gonna introduce us here"
Theo said"Sorry Takura Brittnee , Brittne Takura, and these are the other Karkoia warriors. Takura Brittnee is a member of the Royal family and my sister"
Takura and the other murmured a little and than Takura said, that would explain why you and her could see us. We will gladly take you to the village from where on you are on your own for the path to the temple has been over ridden with dangerous creatures"
With that said the headed off you the the Grand Village where Theo grew up with the Karkoia royal family(Unmentioned previously for surprise). Once they got there Theo was thrown a feast for he was a celebrity and due to the fact he returned and the Karkoia knew he was the one to help them get back their temple. The next morning the Karkoia gave Brittnee two swords similar to Theo's. Brittnee got used to the swords and they headed to the temple.
On their way there they fought creatures such as the soka which resembled squirrels, the makoto which resembled wolfs, and the shakuri which resembled bears.When they got to the temple Theo thrust his to swords into pedestals near the door, and told Brittnee to do the same with the other pedestals. So she did, and the door opened up.
The guy in the all black armor ran out and this time he introduced himself, My name is Andy my job is to serve the Darkness. He challenged Theo to a duel Theo who wanted a decent fight was to happy to accept.
Once more Theo fought this time since he was near the jewel he could get power from it so he fought with all his heart and was receiving a blessing from Vita herself. So he won and as before Andy ran off before Theo could kill him.
They snatched up their sword and Theo and Brittnee walked into the templle.
(Part one complete working hard on the puzzles and deciding what the boss should be If you want me to keep you posted say so)
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| On August 4th 2007 TheBranster Said : | |
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WOW! great so far. you could of gone into more detail about the fighting, though. like the meetings of the creatures in the forrests. could of gone into detail about them. could of gone into detail about walking the path. maybe theo and britnee could of talked about something that would later reappear in the novel. more details would be nice, still a good story so far |
| On August 4th 2007 TheBranster Said : | |
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WOAH, DID YOU DO THE COVER? GRRRREAT. usualy peeps seem to bum cover off elsewhere. good. CHAPTER 3? i shall go read chapter 1 aND exchange thouhghts |


