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hello ...my name is jane
Drama
 Created on 6-2-08
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"hello my name is jane..."
"plz .......keep walkin!!"
through out that day she tried to meet ppl ........no one cared.at her new school everyone was in a clik ...like in every high school.......
she want to work at the local diner......she went home went to bed ...went to school,work,bed...this repeated for about 2 weeks.
she went to work on a hot fall day,in september..little did she know she was meeting her reason for life and death.
"hi...uumm can i have some coffee" said the blue eyed black haired boy in the corner.
"ya,is that all??" she asked...she giggled ..actually giggled.for once she felt pritty...unknown why she just did.
"jake"he said extending his hand...there were scars on his wrists.....his black sleeve slid up just enough where she could see.
"jane" she extended her hand ....his hand was cold .but comforting.
they spoke for hours...he continually ordered coffee ,took a few sips and ordered another cup..so she had to return.by the end of the night there were at least 20 cups of un-drank coffee.
he made her feel like a beautiful......person...there was no rejection towards her from him.that night she knew she fell in love...she had no idea the feeling was mutual.
he walked her home that night....her face tainted my fear of never seeing his beautiful...untrally beautiful self again.he leaned in and kissed her.
her first kiss..her junior year.she walked inside...her stomach tight ...she was shaky.
everyday for 3 months that was the rutene .......they fell in love.....very fast...but very surllie..they did.
"i dont love you anymore."he said his eyes were pained,his voice shaky but in control.
tears began flooding down her cheeks.she couldnt handle it ..he was her life...her everything.he got up and walked away from the rounded seat he and her had sat on every day for the last month.
she sat there cold and alone.she knew she couldnt live ....not without him.....she got up and walked out into the cold december night.christmas eve.she pulled out her wallet and grabbed the razor blades she kept for her box cutter and ended it....
he realized his farther who forbid him to see her was wrong.he turned around and walked to her house.in the snow 20 ft. away from her house was her dead frozen lifeless body.she bled out on in the snow...the snow that had once been pure...like her was drenched in blood.he held her tight ...wrocking back and forth ....needing her back.... he picked up the same blade ..he kissed her again ."soobn we will be together" he slit his wrist....
christmas day the cops found them both frozen..both dead..the cops looked around.......
"hey sarg. you should brobably come see this"..said a younger cop.
"what the-"
in the snow there was a heart........surrounding them ...it was blood.
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Please Login to post comments| On June 3rd 2008 Jora08 Said : | |
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Wow, thats good, just wow |
