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Our Place Part 11

Creative Created on 6-27-07 Views(391) Story Rating G

I woke up again in the morning at about 9 am. Ethan’s arms still holding me tight. Mom was walking around my room cleaning up, as what was supposed to be a yawn escaped me as a sort of shrieked moan. Mother jumped at the sound holding a shirt, she grabbed her heart and then laughed softly walking over to me. She told me “Hey soon your going to have to get up the doctors office called and they want to meet with you.” I nodded my head, dreading what the day would bring. My mom walked out of my room and told me to be ready at 12:00. As she shut the door I shook Ethan a little and whispered “Ethan I have a favor”. He opened his eyes, he almost looked annoyed until he saw my face, quickly he sat up and kissed my forehead. “What is it Em?” “I want to go by our place before the doctors appointment. “But your to weak to walk there”. I replied to him seriously “I know, I have a wheel chair in the garage from when Dad broke his leg, go get that and then we can hook it to the go cart.” Laughing a little he kissed my lips and got up helping me out of bed. As he lead me down stairs his grip tightened and so did mine, It was torture but I told myself I will be downstairs in a minute. Mom came in and asked “what are you doing”? I answered quickly “I want to see the beach before we go”. Moms eyes looked a little annoyed as she started to argue, I budded in as fast as I could. “Mom if I begin treatment who knows how long it will be before I can go see the beach up close again”! “Ok, Ok! I understand.” As my mom took me and helped me down the stairs Ethan ran to get the wheel chair. Sitting down on our couch mom scattered around into the kitchen grabbing the car keys. She held them out to me “Here Ethan can drive you, you are in no condition to walk that far”. Ethan came in just then rolling the wheel chair as it squeaked. Laughing my mom handed him the keys as she whispered to him “take care of her ok”. Nodding his head I got in the wheel chair as Ethan rolled me out to the car as he said laughing "this will be alot easier than the go car" It was hott, but I loved it. The oceans smell captured into my senses as I inhaled it deeply. Getting in to the car Ethan told me “We will be there soon” as he ran over and turned the car on, the convertible top buzzed as it was opened. Next the wheel chair was put in the back of the car. Finally we were on our way, as we hit the road the wind blew in my face as the ocean came in to view. Surfers were out catching waves, people running on the sidewalk above the sea wall men in shorts and no shirt and some women in sports bras and shorts. I lived for this, this beach, the people and animals that filled its surroundings. Finally we were parked and I was In the wheel chair as Ethan began rolling me to the ramp down to the beach. A few skateboarders stopped and moved, some showed sympathy others looked pissed at having to stop there fun. I ignored them. The chair hit the sand and I felt the wheels begin to become heavy but Ethan pushed harder and finally the chair was moving again. I couldn’t wait to get to the place that had brought me so much peace and happiness, the one place where I knew I wouldn’t feel sick, I would feel apart of something other than this world. I would be apart of the ocean the powerful waves and the unknown depths it hid underneath the blue waters that the sun hit so gently. When we finally got passed the people and Ethan rolle dme through the woods and out where people didnt wonder anymore we came to the rocks that led out over the water. The chair could not go any further so I stepped out walking and gently taking Ethans hand off my back and grabbing it with my hand showing him that I could walk with ease. My legs were wobly and my breathign was deep but I kept going wanting to enjoy this exxperience. As we got to the top of the rocks I walked away from Ethan almost running until I came to the end of the natural pier. Around us people could be seen down at the beach, I smiled knowing htey didnt know about this place. Ethan came behind me as he whispered "the oceans almost as beautiful as you". We both laughed becasue thats similair to what he had said the first night we expressed how we felt for each other. I coulnt resist I leaned over and kissed him and then stepped down onto the rocks below the pier that were slightly under water. Feeling the cold water hit my feet up to my knees was soothing as I breathed in the fresh salty air. Ethan gasped "what ar eyou doing Emma you could slip". Looking over at him a little frustrated that everyone saw me as a weak person even though I didnt even know if I had cancer yet I said back to him laughing a little "I cna't fall in... Youw anna know why". Confused he asked "Why"? Getting a smile over my face I spoke and said "this is why" as I jumped off ot the left past the rocks and in to the water.

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On July 1st 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole wtf! crazzzi ass bittcch
On June 29th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 please tell me wen the next part is up! this is such a nice story! i lov it!
On June 28th 2007 performer4evr Said :
performer4evr I love it. I would so do that too.
On June 28th 2007 crytaline Said :
crytaline keep it up its good
On June 28th 2007 steveisagod Said :
my picture
i found a grammer problem. you put to instead of too
On June 27th 2007 metal4lifebaby Said :
metal4lifebaby wow i loved it......but i hope she has enough energy 2 swim........keep me posted plz
On June 27th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle haha thats good writing. keep me posted please. its an awsome story.
On June 27th 2007 meonlyme1234 Said :
meonlyme1234 i love it its so cute keep me updated, dont worry about not being able to keep up with summer love, because idk where to take the story yet so you have some time before the next ones up
On June 27th 2007 starryboo Said :
starryboo so gooood...keep me posted...Thanx...
On June 27th 2007 beachparty57 Said :
beachparty57 this is soo good keep me posted.
On June 27th 2007 ellies15 Said :
ellies15 i dunno if jumping inwas a stupid idea or not. I LOVE THIS STORY! plelase keep my up dated! thanks!
On June 27th 2007 NatalieG1234 Said :
NatalieG1234 ow its really good, really cute how he wants to help her so much. i love it.
On June 27th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said :
Byrnesrebel i hope shes not too week to swim. cause if she dies, that would DEF. not be cool. lol awesome story. tell me when the next one comes. :]
On June 27th 2007 Jokilolo Said :
Jokilolo So cute.