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The beginning of the end

Creative Created on 6-25-07 Views(180) Story Rating G

 *Please note that this story will bounce around a lot and will be very hard to understand, it is confusing because it is going to be confusing to a lot of poeple. Please give it a chance, it will become more and more clear as you follow it. I appreciate comments and if you like it I appreciate it if you rate:) thanks.*   Grogan lay in the cold wt dirt head first inhaling its wet particles. Blood ran down his face and his breathing was weak along with his body and his pride. He coughed up blood as tears followed along with snot and mumbled prayers. As he heard the thunder strike he shuddered, the people of Euphoria anon calamity a world of happiness always thought the thunder was the angels walking and the rain were the tears they shed for those not here in this wonderful place. When he had found out what the thunder truly was it made him want to die, to leave this place. He shivered as his half naked body only covered by a cloth around his waist, moving even this small made him cry out in into the darkness unheard. His back was beaten his knees useless, thinking of the 6 other lands that existed. The poor souls of the other 6 beaten devastated plagued and taken over. The first land was named despondency after pain for it was destined to be the first to ever feel it. The second pestilence for it was the first to suffer plagues. The third lugubriosity, after depression for there land would be the first to cry. The fourth was named deluge after flood for it was the first to experience rain, and the thunder and lightening that followed along with the flooding it brought. The fifth was named incandescence, after burning, for it was the first land to experience the devastation of fire. And the sixth the last of the lands before euphoria anon calamity was named terminal which was named for its meaning, final or the end. He found also that night that euphoria anon calamity the most happiest place on earth was named euphoria after happiness and confidence and anon calamity for then doom. It all started a year ago when Grogan was sent to the first world to help despondency because an awful occurrence had taken over their land. There was pain, something they had never felt, there was no way to express it except to scream for tears would not be available for two more worlds. All they could do was express it in anyway else they could. The worlds were like times as another world was invented another ability was added. Almost all of the worlds could see feel and think the same way except for the seven endings.  Pain, plague, depression, flood, fire, and of course happiness. The people in the first land began to feel pain but could not cry because a tear had never fallen until the third world was created. You could only cry If you were in the third, fourth, fifth, and sixth world. The seventh world was in bliss though, free from any of the negative endings. Until one day when it would begin to form from euphoria to calamity, this would be known as the anon stage. A stage from happiness to doom, it was (then) or anon when the world of euphoria anon calamity also known as the land of eac would transcend from the wonderful world it had always been to a world of doom. The difference of eac and the other six worlds was it had a beginning and ending name, the other worlds only had one. They would experience normal lives until the end was near and then they would constantly feel the name of their land. Sadly nobody knew what there worlds name meant until it happened, unless you were of royal blood. It was only the royal blood who knew the devastating affects that each world had, which each ending would bring. It was only they who could stop it, sadly it was no longer possible.  In the beginning there were 8 gods and goddesses, Anella, , escode, chaste, lordane, mercy, crane, harmony and anar. The 8 gods and goddesses created the first world together anella starting the creation, when they ahd finished creating it anella became stuck in it, she had created it for mortals to feel pain, the evil she would place upon these people would also be palced upon her now for her behavior. Mother nature had cursed her to be stranded here as part mortal until the end when she would feel the pain and suffering of all of her worshipers. The other gods and goddesses did not know this an continued creating   The god of pestilence was named escode where he was also cursed and kept their by mother nature. Then the goddess of lugubriosity, was chaste and the god of deluge was lordane, the goddess of incandescence was mercy and the goddess of terminal was crane. The only two left were harmony and anar, they were left alone and fell and love. Harmony felt so much love that she created a world filled with happiness or called euphoria what she described it as. When anar and her made love harmony got pregnant and was to have a child. They were not stranded for euphoria wasn’t made for punishment anymore but for happiness followed by love  but mother nature gave them a test and a temptation to feel all of the euphoria to themselves. She explained this to anar and told him that if he killed their baby that the feeling would be come more powerful and even better than the love he felt with harmony and that she would grant him with mortal virgins to last him a lifetime. Mother nature had tested harmony and she had passed telling her no that she would never do anything to harm the child or anar for happiness for without them she would not feel true happiness, but anar given this temptation was overwhelmed with lust and greed and a spell came over him. He took a gigantic rose and told harmony to meet him in the garden for dinner as she came he presented her with a giant rose, as he went to give it to her he then thrust the thorn into her stomach killing the baby. Mother nature saw that anar had failed her test and was infuriated with him, the baby that died in harmonies stomach was taken from the womb by mother nature and its blood was mixed with soil and earth and another world was created a world called salacity a world where anything you want would appear in front of you, as you ran to it, it would then disappear as you grabbed for it, it would then turn into an acid that would erupt onto your skin and burn you causing you to cry, and scream in pain. The scream could be heard all over the 7 worlds as thunder. Each world had a turn hearing it and each world could see lightning as the acid struck there bodies and every world after deluge could  see the tears that fell from pain. Anar was stranded their for eternity living in eternal pain and smelling the blood of his dead child every minute he wasn’t fantasizing his wants. Harmony was devastated and told mother nature to let euphoria have 7 thousand years of happiness and have 3 and a half thousand years of transition mixed with happiness and doom and then after the anon time have doom that turned into the destruction of euphoria forever. That is how euphoria got hanged from its name to eac. Little did harmony no that her broken heart had let go a rage, that would turn each of the worlds her truest friends were stranded on to experience what they were named after seven thousand years, and instead of having an anon time they would experience it stronger and stronger each day for 3 and a half thousand. When her world would fill with doom all of the worlds would transcend together into a war that harmony would start. This would start by the worlds binding together, a sign unknown even to her and then anar appearing in the sky, his fantasies revealed to her eyes. Her bitterness and rage would then turn to action as she would kill her second child her first to be born, her son. This would be the beginning of the end  I know I know it was probably confusing, give it a hcance it will become more and more clear, it all has a meanign and will all follow itself through. Thanks:)

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On August 6th 2007 mjr777 Said :
mjr777 i think its pretty good keep writeing n ull get it perfect
On June 25th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said :
Byrnesrebel it was confusing, but it was cool. keep me posted on this one :]
On June 25th 2007 jenni24014 Said :
jenni24014 nice job
On June 25th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie there is a correction where it says calamity the most happiest place on earth it should say calamity the most hapiest place of all the worlds sorry about that mistake:)
On June 25th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx very good
On June 25th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie sorry about any errors its really late or shoud i say arly lol, please let me know what you think