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Blood Stained White Part 13
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 Created on 6-21-07
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When we were finished it was fivehours later, Dana was breathing hard and so was I. I had been definitely out of my safe zone tonight. I hadn’t just layed there, I was being my own person, even when the drugs wore off. And I faked it, I faked it loud and made it sound like he was amazing, I almost convinced myself. Dana had been great too, but she seemed proud of me. I had been on top a few times, I made him cum, I made him smile. Dana and I took him places his home life never could, tying him up, him tying us up. He was excited because his wife didn’t believe in this. That’s why he came to us, we served him, we didn’t attach emotion, we didn’t put limits. Only he did. He was our boss. It was 3 in the morning when we left. He had paid Dana, she would give it to Kane who would be waiting and give him what he took for his services, and what we owed him for rent and of course my new motivator my drugs. We had made $1,500.00 in five hours. It was 150 and hour for me and the same for Dana, that had already been 300 and hour. He kept us for 5 hours it was easy to add, and for him easy to spend. When we left Dana pulled out her cell and I knew she was calling Kane. I hear the whole conversation. The mumbling of Kanes voice in the background sounded muffled to my ears, as Dana answered and talked to him. Kane! 1500 dollas!... Yes Im serious, na not a regula he was in for a business trip. Mhmm. No not alone!... Lori came, we had a double date with drinks and dinna… No she was great! Ya mhm, meet us at the Grand Oak hotel, ya outside. Because he drove us, I know were outta territory so we wont pull anything, just hurry. Looking over at Dana as she hung up I asked her “what do you mean out of territory” ? She went and sat down on a bench as I followed as our black jackets covered our other clothing. She lit a cigarette inhaling and after she exhaled she looked at me taking a deep breath. “It means that this is Monteys territory, another pimp. We can’t work these streets or he will hurt us or even kill us. She looked down and took another drag of her cigarette. Looking at her I asked “whats wrong”. “Lori do you know why I made an effort to meet Kane”?“No” I answered in a confused voice.“I did it because my friend Ashley and I ran away from home, we worked the streets alone for about a month when a pimp killed her. That why its so important to have Kane, he does more for us than we think…
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On September 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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wow........ |
| On July 4th 2007 BillysGirl2005 Said : | |
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You forgot that Lori gets more an hour than Dana because she's younger. Other than that, pretty good.. I would have liked more detail. |
| On June 30th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said : | |
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wow dana makes kane sound like such a great guy when hes not unbelieveable love the story |
| On June 25th 2007 jdwluver Said : | |
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great now i am on the next part :) |
| On June 25th 2007 lilangelofgod Said : | |
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wow... |
| On June 25th 2007 nodaywithoutu Said : | |
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this was gr8 |
| On June 23rd 2007 oreoash Said : | |
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8o......my names ashleY!! lol, good job, tell me when next part is up |
| On June 23rd 2007 DaKay Said : | |
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HOLY FRICK!! I've read each one!! Please notify me when there's more |
| On June 22nd 2007 Fashionista330 Said : | |
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please notify me when 14 is out please!! thanks so much!! i love this story!! |
| On June 22nd 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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wow great. keep me posted. i love this story |
| On June 22nd 2007 dreamer2495 Said : | |
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goood |
| On June 22nd 2007 beachparty57 Said : | |
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It was great please write more.!! |
| On June 22nd 2007 chrisie95 Said : | |
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I hate how you leave us hanging! tell me when the next is out! |
| On June 22nd 2007 JCwashington13 Said : | |
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THis one was awesome keep me posted |
| On June 22nd 2007 metal4lifebaby Said : | |
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it was great....cant wait for the next one |
