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A Tragedy Emerges

the venture of pain

Creative Created on 1-13-08 Views(50) Story Rating G

This is the story of a love so unrequited it hurts. The story of failure in a young girls life. And the story of discovery, after the venture of forever.

Her heart was beating so fast, It hurt. She felt like dying after the unsatisfying answer she had just received. “I cant believe I just told him that…” Haven told herself. “I need to know that he feels the same way….and all he says is ‘thanks’….great answer, Jake.” Haven started to walk down the hall of that dark building, and her heart beat faster and faster as she got closer to the door. She was so close, she could almost feel the sense of walking down the pavement towards her home. But wait, she didn’t actually want to go back, did she? “no….I cant” she had nowhere to go…and no one could help her. She was alone in this world. All alone….

As Haven walked down the sidewalk, she couldn’t help but cry in the night air…..and scream; for no one could hear her. She needed to let her feelings out….all she felt was pain. Broken hearted at the moment, and nowhere to go. Not the greatest position to be in. she pulled her wallet out of her bag…but all she found inside was ten dollars and an old movie stub. Across the street, she could see the theatre closing up, and all the light going with it. She needed to go somewhere…to stay somewhere….the last thing she saw before hitting the ground…and the last thought was hoping she’d be able to see it again…

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