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ALONE AT HOME.....

ALONE AT HOME 2.........

Horror Created on 9-10-07 Views(183) Story Rating G

I opened my eyes to a strange smell.I sat up and saw blood all over my clothes .I was startled, i lifted up my shirt to see where i was hurt, but i soon discovered that the blood was`nt mine!.I tried to think of what happened before i fainted, and all together i had flashbacks playing through my mind like a movie.hey! who was that guy or thing or whatever that picked me off the floor and brought me here, i`m not even sure where here is...i looked around me and saw this really old furniture in the room, i got up and looked out a window and i was two stories up from the ground and outside was a huge garden but it was all dead, no flowers or anything, the sun was about to set and the sight outside was really wonderful.

            I searched around in this huge mansion for 15 minutes and was now lost, suddenly i heard footsteps coming my way.I was really scared of who or what that was coming my way, it  was too late to hide or even try to run! so i just stood there awaiting my fate.It came out of the dark and to my surprise it was the most gorgeous guy i had seen!.He was like a male supermodel even better than one!, his bone structure, his perfect nose, his golden eyes, a girl could stare at him all day long, he cut my train of thought when he finall spoke,"i see that you`re up", "um, yea", "how are you now?", "i`m ok, actually a lot better, were u the ----", "yes , sorry for coming into your house like that its just that i was ---", "we`ll talk about it later, you should take a shower, there must be some clothes that belonged to my late aunt in the closet in your room, put anything on and join me downstairs for dinner", "um, can you help me, i`m lost, where`s my room again?", he smiled a bit and grabbed my hand"come , i`ll take you to your room". After a long way up the stairs we were at my room, i went to the closet to check the outfits and took out a black knee-length spaghetti strap dress, and a pair of black heals to go with it. After takin a shower ,i got dressed and luckily found my way downstairs, he was sitting on a chair in the hallway in front of me.He immediately stood up when he saw me and stared at me like that for a breif time and then took my hand and leaded me towards the dining room."you look lovely! even my aunt could`nt make this dress look as good as you do"he said with a smile on his face while he took the chair for me and i sat down."thanks, i really dont deserve the compliment" i said completely blushed!."we both know you do". After a long three course meal he took me on his terrace to tell me something."i know you have a mllion questions in your mind right now but before you speak i`ll answer them for you" , "before  tell you what happened promise me you wont get scared, do you trust me?",i was really confused, what is  this guy talking about, puzzled and unsure of what to do i simply nodded at his question of trust."ok, here goes, i`m a ..........."  " i`m a vampire!, dont be scared i wont bite, atleast not you" he said with a mischevious smile on his face"i was in your house because i was after Damien, he`s also a vampire but he`s not a good one, he came into your house just for food if you know what i mean and i had to stop him, i saw you with all the blood across the floor and i could`nt just leave you there, so i brought you home with me, you cant go back home for a couple of days, its not safe for you, untill then you`ll have to stay with me, dont worry , i just want to help", i did`nt answer back, i was trying to put it all in my brain, it was too much for one day so i just nodded back and sat on a chair beside him still figuring it out, vampires? do they really exist or .............. am i just dreaming?.......

TO BE CONTINUED...............

 

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On October 11th 2007 degrassinerd Said :
degrassinerd good storie
On September 12th 2007 kittx Said :
kittx i like it but be sure to not over think your ideas and even if they are vampires make it still seem a little realistic i will rate you tho cause i like it
On September 11th 2007 safeharbour13 Said :
safeharbour13 ty for commenting and i`ll take ur suggestios into my next story, tootles.lol i cant believe i just said that!!!
On September 10th 2007 ray7chel Said :
ray7chel good.
On September 10th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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i agree wiht jirrith...don't rush it so much...and she seemed really comfortable with a complete stranger....but its pretty good =)
On September 10th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 its a good story, but since everything was bunched together in one paragraph, it was kind of confusing. Put more details in to the story. It would make it more enjoyable to read. keep it up!!