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Punk princess

NonFiction Created on 9-5-07 Views(182) Story Rating G

Even today when i talk about it chills run through my spines.

It was a typical day at the mall, i was with my best freind vanessa.Shop after shop but i did`nt find what i was looking for, so i decided to save this trip for another day and me and vanessa got to the food court to get something to eat before we did anymore shopping .Vanessa still had some shopping to do but i could`nt go on cuz i was too tired."sorry but i have to get a few more things for that family get together tommorow, if you cant go on just stay here and have  a drink or something, i`ll meet you here in 15-20 mins, i promise" i thought for a while and replied, "well ok, since it`s that important to you, you go on and get what you need and i`ll be right here, but be sure to meet me in 20 mins or i`ll leave", "thanks, ur the best!, i`ll be soon i promise" saying this vanessa rushed out of the food court, leaving me and my latte all alone.Sip after sip and finally i reached the end of the latte, "now what" i wondered to myself, i looked around me to see if anything interesting was going on and i spotted this totally handsome guy with a great body, sitting at a table all alone, when a waiter was bringing him his drink it accidently spilled a bit on the guy`s shirt and he threw the remaining drink in the waiter`s face and hit him with the tray and said"maybe next time you`ll keep your fucking eyes where you`re going you idiot".He was so agressive and he looked even hotter when he was, i got so lost looking at him that after a while i realized everybody had left the food court except me!.I went over to the counter and asked the counter boy who that hyper agressive guy was, "that`s joey, he`s the leader of this gang of trouble makers, you better leave this place or you`ll probably be next", hearing that, i grew even more curious to meet him and know about him,"maybe i should go talk to him, see if he wants to be freinds", "you should`nt even try to stare at him, listen i`m telling you for the last time that it`ll be good for you to leave now, or you`ll be responsible for you`re own damages"said the counter boy in a very shaky voice, "ur all chickens! he`s only human, what`s the worst that can happen, he`ll hit me??, i`m willing to take the risk"saying that i walked to his table."hi, you`re joey right, i`m aly", he looked up from the table and gave me a cold stare,"i dont care what your name is , get the hell out of my sight or i`ll hurt ya" , "i`m not gonna bite, i just wanna say hi", "if you dont leave to thecount of three i`ll kill u i swear!", "go ahead, it`ll be the first", he got up from the table and took out a pocket knife from his jeans pocket, "1..........2..............3" and he charged towards me ......

 

THIS IS MY FIRST STORY PPL, PLEAZE TELL ME HOW THIS WAS, CUZ I`VE GOT MORE, THIS IS`NT THE ENDING, I`LL ONLY WRITE PARTS 2 AND 3 IF YOU GUYS LEAVE ME COMMENTS, I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT!!!

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On October 12th 2007 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic AWESOME!!!!!
On September 23rd 2007 degrassinerd Said :
degrassinerd wow
On September 7th 2007 safeharbour13 Said :
safeharbour13 PART 2 HAS BEEN RELEASED, ENJOY! :D
On September 7th 2007 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend this is great!!!!! so exciting!!!
On September 5th 2007 safeharbour13 Said :
safeharbour13 COMMENTS PPL!!!, PLZZZZZ