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ALONE AT HOME.....

ALONE AT HOME.....

Fiction Created on 9-5-07 Views(178) Story Rating G

it was just like any other time mom and dad had to go out, and i would be home by myself, alone like all the other times.They trusted me well enough to let me stay alone at home and they were totally right to do that.It was nice to have the whole house to myself and just like any other time i would make some popcorn and watch a movie.The popcorn got ready i took it to my room and i was almost about to hit the play button when the power shut down, "AGAIN"!!! i thought to myself really irritated by this."its the third time this week"! i said, as i slowly went down stairs trying not to trip, "atleast the moon looks magnetic tonight", i thougt as i looked out the window , it was really beautiful outside, like some sort of silent celebration in the night.The night was so beautiful that it pulled me outside to the front yard, where i lied down on the grass and looked up at the moon and got lost in its light.It was all going well until i heard a huge 'thud' from the house, and i got up and headed inside the house at once.I did`nt see the chair laying on the floor in the dark , i tripped over it and my head hit the ground.I tried to get my head up but i could`nt and i felt something wet on my hands, 'BLOOD'!!!, all over the floor, i felt so weak and helpless that i could`nt even scream for help.I was starting to think i would die when  a dark figure from the kitchen picked me up off the floor , that was the last thing i remeber before i fainted.

 

THIS IS MY FIRST STORY PPL!, PLZ TELL ME HOW IT WAS AND TELL ME IF YOU WANT ME TO WRITE PART TWO, HOPE U LIKE IT :D

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On October 11th 2007 degrassinerd Said :
degrassinerd i like all your stories
On September 14th 2007 DarkVampier Said :
DarkVampier keep me posted on this one plz and grate work.
On September 10th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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sounds kewl so far...but it went kinda fast...
On September 5th 2007 ray7chel Said :
ray7chel good. keep posted.
On September 5th 2007 safeharbour13 Said :
safeharbour13 I NEED YOUR COMMENTS PPL!!!!!
On September 5th 2007 bambam11727 Said :
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that was awesome i wanna hear the rest of the story!!!
On September 5th 2007 kittx Said :
kittx i like it seems okay i would want to read part two