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Creative Created on 4-19-08 Views(214) Story Rating G

What was I supposed to do with a beanstalk? I knew I must have needed it in some way since that’s how the magic worked, but I could figure out how. I didn't think it would be very tasty, but my stomach was growling so fierce I didn't really care; at least it would be something. It was a plant, couldn't be all that bad, right?
I tried to pluck off one of the smaller leaves, about the size of my hand, but it would come off. I pulled harder, using all my weight, but it still stayed firmly attached to the stalk.
So maybe I wasn’t supposed to eat it, but what else could it be for?
I couldn’t see how it could relate to finishing my quest, and I was getting frustrated.
My stomach churned again, demanding food.
I took a step forward, looking around to make sure nobody was close. I felt my face flush even though there was nobody there, feeling embarrassed at what I was thinking about doing. But I was hungry! I took a step closer to the beanstalk and leaned in, the mossy smell filling my senses. I opened my mouth and chomped down on one of the leaves, suddenly becoming overcome with an extreme starchy taste. I quickly scrambled away, trying to spit out the awful taste plastered on the lining on my mouth, deciding that it definitely was not meant to be eaten.
I had been purged of any hunger from the extreme grossness of the plant, and so my mind was clear as I tried to figure out again how a beanstalk could be of use.
I figured it had to have something to do with where I was supposed to go from there, some sort of sign, but all the leaves pointed it every direction. Unless… no that’d be silly, then again, when had anything been normal? It seemed strange to me that I would have to travel up to see a demon, but I couldn’t think of any other use for the enormous beanstalk.
          I put a foot on one of the lower leaves experimentally, trying to see if it would hold my weight. Surprisingly, it held firm and still despite it being a thin leaf, even if it was large. Slowly I placed all my weight on it; it still held still. I lifted myself up off the ground and placed my other foot on another leaf a little higher, holding on to the stalk so I didn’t fall backwards. Step my step I made progress up the beanstalk, wondering what I would find at the top.
          To replace the fearful thoughts of how high I had gotten, I imagined what I thought the Demon would look like. I envisioned him as a deep blood red with protruding yellow eyes and sharp extensive horns. In my picture, he was wearing a snarl, showing off his pointed teeth. He was wearing nothing but a simple wrap around his posterior. I shivered at the image, fright spreading throughout me, adding to the fear of heights that had started overflowing into my mind.
          Ok, different subject, I decided, trying to find a safe topic to think about.
          Kainen! There was never anything wrong with thinking about Kainen, except sadness knowing he was dead at this moment, but I was confident that I’d be able to save him. I drew on the memories of the times we were together: how he’d look at me and I could see his love in his eyes, all the times he had walked with me through the garden talking about nothing but still having a lot to say. I remembered how I’d always feel around him: safe, protected, loved. I had been so comfortable in his presence, like nothing could ever come between us. I sighed, I had been wrong about that. For a moment I recalled the betrayal I had felt when I found out how he lied, but I quickly shoved them aside wanting to focus on happier times.
          I had left him and he had given his life up in the sense of hopelessness. I was responsible for his recent state, and I had to make it right. I made a promise to myself at that moment that I would stop at nothing to save Kainen; one way or another I would be with him.
          With this determination I started climbing the beanstalk faster, taking it leaf by leaf until I broke through the clouds.  
          I climbed through the thick fog of clouds as the haze slowly faded to reveal an ethereal scene surrounding me.
          White pillars seemed to be scattered in no visible pattern, each in various stages of decay. A soft yet bright light was shining on them, making them look full of awe and wonder. On my white there was a short stage like area with a white throne sitting in the middle. It looked like a picture of heaven, warm and calming. It looked like a old ruin of the Angel of Life’s quarters.
          I could picture a demon living here, and wondered what this had to do with my quest. I took a step onto the cloud, knowing it had to be solid for the pillars and such to stay up. But it wasn’t solid; it was more like walking on condensed air. I made my way slowly to the throne, calling out softly if anyone was there. The scene was too peaceful; I didn’t want to ruin it with my shouting.
          “Do you like it?” A soft yet strong voice asked behind me, and I spun around to see a man that looked exactly like the Angel of Life, except a lot more inviting.
          “It’s beautiful.” I whispered.
          “Yes, I agree.” He smiled, and I felt completely at ease.
          I watching him as he slowly walked to the throne; he seemed to glide over the clouds.
          “Who are you?” I asked in wonder.
          “I’m Thanos.” He said curtly.
          “Thanos?” I repeated.
          “Yes, my brother, Zoltan, calls me the Demon of Death.” He laughed, “He’s a little bit vain, likes to think life is more important than death. I rather think they are equal, don’t you agree?”
          I nodded; I liked this man. Not in a more-than-friends way but he was very peaceful and kind.
          Abruptly I remembered how I had pictured him, and it made me laugh. How wrong I had been.
I apologize for the long wait; I’ve been busy with school and life hasn’t been very kind. I will try to get a couple chapters more up this weekend!
I really like writing this story, and I never seem to get writers block with it which is amazing lol. Only story that has been like that for me but anyway thanks for all the comments and votes!

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On May 2nd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Sorry I haven't been reading your chapters lately - I've been really busy switching my stuff from testriffic to mibba. You should get an account there- that way if you mess up on spelling/grammar you can just go back to edit it, plus you can add a layout to your story!! It's so cool. Oh wait a sec I forgot - great chapter :D lol
On April 21st 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awsome luved it kmp
On April 20th 2008 ShiningKanin Said :
ShiningKanin love it!
On April 20th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 i love this!! great!!
On April 20th 2008 chorusgal Said :
chorusgal loving it kmp please
On April 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 HOORAY!!! Although, I was hoping she'd meet Jack... Oh well, still a great story! Keep me posted!
On April 19th 2008 HipsterHanna Said :
HipsterHanna This is great! KMP!
On April 19th 2008 JuniorDot Said :
JuniorDot Kmp!!^_^ Is there gonna be a giant though since she climbed a beanstalk?
On April 19th 2008 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro phenomenal job overall though; very nice work
On April 19th 2008 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro If you ever wanted to do some editing: "I liked this man. Not in a more-than-friends way but he was very peaceful and kind." not in a more than friends kind of way does not really need to be specified, and the expression seems a bit out of place with the way that the rest of the story is written.
On April 19th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood i love it! she found the demon of death! she can save Kainen!! kmp
On April 19th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen keep me posted =]
On April 19th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :
ridinbitch0807 love it! love the jack and the beanstalk use. really good!
On April 19th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 omg yay! kmp plz thanks
On April 19th 2008 Akinka Said :
Akinka Don't worry about the wait... we don't mind waiting for such an amazing story!!!