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Horror Created on 4-13-08 Views(334) Story Rating G

It walked slowly but deliberately to my drivers window. It didn't limp or anything; It didn't seem hurt or even phased at all.

The vampire had a frail structure and I knew even before she lowered her head to look into my drivers side window that it was the girl vampire that wanted my boyfriend.

“Hello darling.” She said sweetly, but there was a hint of anger in her eyes that stopped me from responding.

I sat, frozen in fear. I didn't know what she was going to do to me, but I knew it couldn't be good.

“Why don't you join me out here, and we can have a little chat?” She invited, opening my door for me.

“I t-t-think I'll p-p-pass.” I stuttered in fright, shifting slightly away from the door. I slowly reached my hand out with the intention of shutting the door, but the vampress took the advantage and swinging around to the other side of the door she grabbed my arm and pulled me out.

I landed with a thud on the rough road and heard her slam the door before kneeling down next to me.

“If your pathetic little boyfriend thinks he can stay away from me, then he has another thing coming.” She said menacingly. “He's going to regret it.” Then she grabbed my head and hit my head against the pavement. Everything went black.

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I woke up in the dark, my head throbbing so bad it was hard to concentrate on my surroundings. My hands and legs were chained to a cold rocky wall. I tried to wriggle free but I wasn't strong enough. There was a musty smell to the room and I could hear the soft pitter patter of something dripping in the corner. Slowly my eyes adjusted and I noticed a faint light barely made it into the room. I noticed the stagnates hanging from the ceiling and I knew I was in a cave.

As soon as this realization hit me, the girl vampire walked into the room.

“Ooo, you're awake.” She smiled evilly. “How was your nap?” She let out a sinister laugh.

“Where am I?” I asked, trying to sound brave.

“My home, don't you like it?” She fake pouted.

“Who are you?”

“Tiassale Mirrada.” She scowled.

Tiassale Mirrada, it sounded familiar but I couldn't place it. Tiassale Mirrada. Then it hit me. She was the girl who had supposedly gone into the cave and was never seen again! I was a little girl when that happened and didn't really understand what was going on. But now I was older, and I understood now.

The news had said she was at the cemetery with a bunch of friend from her high school, and then she got dared to go into the cave. According to her companions she had accepted and walked slowly into the cave. After a few moments they heard her scream, but they were too scared to go in after her and ran away instead, leaving her there. No wonder she was so mad.

“What do you want with me?” I growled.

She grinned, “Nothing really. Your just the bait to get to your boyfriend. See, he'll come here when he finds out you're missing and then ill have him trapped. He'll have to do everything I ask,” He eyes narrowed, “Otherwise I'll have his love for lunch.” She laughed, high and maniac like. I shivered.

“You'll never get him!” I declared.

“Haha, and what are you going to do?” She walked closer to me so she was standing so close I could smell her. She smelt like an animal.

She brought her hand up and ran it across my face, not losing her mean facial expression. I snapped my teeth at her hand, trying to bite her but she was too quick. She laughed. “Your helpless, little one. Just a measly weak little human.” She spat.

Then in one swift movement she punched me hard in my stomach, leaving me gasping for breath.

“You'll learn to keep your mouth shut.” She said. “But until then...” She hit my head again, sending it bouncing of the wall and sending me into unconsciousness again.

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“Let her go!” I heard him beg, as I slowly faded back into reality, though everything still seemed muffled out of focus like a dream.

“I will, I will. After you do my bidding.” The girl vampire spoke firmly.

“Please, I'll do anything...” His voice sounded familiar.

“I know you will.” She replied smug.

“Ill stay forever if you let her go now.” He bargained, and I realized the voice belonged to Landon.

“This is much more fun.” She chuckled.

Then there was a hard smacking sound; one of them got punched.

“Oh! You're going to pay for that.” She threatened and I knew she was the one to receive the hit.

“Do your worst.” Landon retorted, confident.

“Don't worry, I will.” She snubbed.



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On July 14th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 wow the girl vamp likes to manipulate people
On June 2nd 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess wow she ugh i cant even put what she is into words its not their fault shes a vampire
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rosebrugh kmp and i dont think that he should've done that no matter how much i hate her
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