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THIRST: Intro

Horror Created on 3-22-08 Views(541) Story Rating G

 

I knew we shouldn’t have gone out to the cemetery that night, I knew something bad was going to happen. They had to have a reason to lock it up, but nobody knew why. We figured it was just to give the dead peace, but oh how wrong we were.  It was Halloween, and we just wanted to have some fun, we just wanted a scare. How were we supposed to know the cave was filled with bats? How were we supposed to know they bit? And how was I supposed to know that one bite was going to turn my boyfriend into a vampire?  
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On June 2nd 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess yes i like it
On April 23rd 2008 jazmin591 Said :
jazmin591 OMG sounds awesome!!!!!!!
On April 1st 2008 Artemisseven Said :
Artemisseven Sounds Great! Keep me posted.
On April 1st 2008 stubishead Said :
stubishead hey. i love your writing. PLEASE keep me posted ! .x
On March 27th 2008 Ilikelimes90 Said :
Ilikelimes90 Cool, i really like the idea pwease KMP!!!!
On March 27th 2008 HipsterHanna Said :
HipsterHanna Hm, sounds pretty cool! KMP.
On March 25th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said :
vampirefreak61 sounds gd but seems 2 used up.
On March 24th 2008 y0i5op Said :
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hmmmm...not bad! kmpp
On March 24th 2008 MonkeyLover115 Said :
MonkeyLover115 ooh me likey!!!! lol but yeah,, sounds really cool so kmp please!!!!!!!! :D :P
On March 24th 2008 Aradae Said :
Aradae KMP :)
On March 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Sounds interesting :) kmp
On March 24th 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 KMP!
On March 24th 2008 oceanbluebook Said :
oceanbluebook kmp plz
On March 24th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :
muffinbobeat48 How about looking at my "Estia" vampire story?
On March 24th 2008 mikhee Said :
mikhee kmp
On March 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 kmp
On March 23rd 2008 cursedxisxwhat Said :
cursedxisxwhat sounds good. i love vampire stories. have you ever read twilight by stephenie meyers? loveee. kmp!
On March 23rd 2008 lovehungercree Said :
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On March 23rd 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 hm... starting with qustions, classic! way to give a short sweet preveiw... sounds good so far...
On March 23rd 2008 Djshadownite Said :
Djshadownite =D i lovevamp stories1!!! KMP please??
On March 23rd 2008 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings wow...interesting =D id like to read more XD
On March 23rd 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 It sounds good, plz kmp!
On March 23rd 2008 bcv72 Said :
bcv72 Ooooh. Sounds good. Definately KMP.
On March 23rd 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 sounds scary! kmp please!!1
On March 23rd 2008 damita3 Said :
damita3 interesting...kmp plz!!