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Drama Created on 7-19-07 Views(374) Story Rating G

 

            I quickly spun around to face a metallic creature. Standing about 7’ tall he towered over my 5’2” frame. I stood there, staring at him, unsure of what to think. He was very slim and wasn’t wearing any cloths; although he didn’t have anything to hide anyway, I wasn’t even sure he was actually a he.

 

            “What, or who, are you?” I questioned, blinking again to see if this was actually real.

 

            “We are the elements of earth, born from the sun and moon” He replied, “I am Metal.”

 

            As he spoke, a few other ‘elements’ rose up behind him. One was as soft and blue as the ocean. Another was a rough mixture of brown and green. Bright red and yellows blazed in the third creature. The last was a milky white and seemed to drift like a gentle summer breeze. All of them built with the same structure and features: Tall, slender, with only dots for eyes and a linear mouth.

 

            “I am Water”

 

            “I am Earth”

 

            “I am Fire”

 

            “And I am Air”

 

            They all introduced themselves in the same robotic voice as Metal; only they each had their own unique ‘tone’.

 

            Amazed at their strong presence, I stood there in awe unable to speak or even think. But soon enough my thoughts came back to me. Am I in some kind of other dimension? Why am I here? I wondered, confused.

 

            “Yes, I suppose another ‘dimension’ would be a good definition. And you, Myra Elise Watson, were sent here by the prophecy to rescue Sun and Moon, whom have been captured by Lord Desolate” Air answered my unasked questions.

 

            “You can read minds? Prophecy? Rescue? Oh no mister, you must have the wrong girl. I can’t be a hero! I’m only 15! Last time I tried saving something, it didn’t work.  There is no way…” I said shaking my head, remembering the time I tried saving my pet hamster when he decided to go exploring and then he accidentally got captured by my cat…

 

            “Yes, uhuh, yeah. I know this all very hard for you to believe, but without you our world will be forever buried in evil. This affects you too, because right now your dimension has no sun and moon either.” Stated Earth.

 

            “No sun or moon?! Wouldn’t that ruin everything and send our world into an ice age?”

 

            “Yes, eventually, but the rudiments of time and space are not the same here. A day here equals not even a second on earth.” Water explained.

 

            “Oh, cool.”

 

            “Now we must hurry, we are running out of time.” Declared Fire. “The prophecy exclaims that ‘After a time of trial and darkness, a young woman shall be sent to bring back the light. A man sent by tragic terms shall accompany her, and they will journey past malevolence obstacles. The end bringing death along with life’.”  

 

            “Oh good, I get company! I knew there was no way I could do this alone!” I exclaimed delightfully, and then remembered the last part ‘The end shall bring death along with life’. “Wait, death? Who’s? Does it say?” I asked worriedly.  

 

            “No.” Responded Metal. “We know only of whom the two people they speak of are, you and Zain.” As he spoke a young man came around him. His short black hair brought out the blue in his striking eyes. He wore just a t-shirt and jeans, but that didn’t hide his intimidating muscles. He stood tall and brave at 6’, I felt comforted knowing he was to escort me.

 

            Taking a step forward he introduced himself “Hey, I’m Zain.” then held out his hand.

 

            I shook it. His strong grip almost crushing my hand, but I didn’t want to appear weak so I didn’t say anything about it. “Nice to meet you, I’m Myra.”

 

            “I know.” He Smiled. “You must be tired, here” He handed me the softest pair of pajamas you’ve ever felt and started leading me somewhere. He continued, “We have set up a hut for you for the night, you’ll need your rest, we’re starting on our journey tomorrow.”

 

            “Thanks” I squeaked as he opened the door of the hut for me.

 

            It seemed like the whole hut was made of wood, except for the roof which was covered in hay. I realized I didn’t have any shoes on as the dirt floor massaged my feet. There wasn’t any window, but somehow the hut was lit up so I could see. In the corner there was a single cot holding a tattered blanket and a flat pillow, and it didn’t seem very comfortable. Oh great, how am I suppose to get a good night’s sleep on that? I wondered. I quickly put on my pajamas and laid myself down on the makeshift bed.

 

            “Ahh!” Surprised, I quickly got back up on my feet. The bed was incredibly comfortable despite its looks! I guess you can’t judge a bed by its appearance I chuckled.

           

            “You alright?” I spun around to face Zain, standing in the doorway.

 

            “Haha, yeah I’m good. Hey uhh, have you been there the whole time?” I asked, feeling a little embarrassed.

 

            “No, haha, I heard you shout and came to check on you.” He explained.

 

            “Oh, that’s good. Yeah I was surprised at how comfy the bad is” I sighed in relief.

 

            “Oh, I see you haven’t gotten used to the fact that nothing’s as it seems here.” He observed. “Now get to bed, I’ll wake you up in the morning.” He said turning around to leave.

 

            “Goodnight!” I shouted after him.

 

            “Goodnight!” I heard him holler back from outside my hut.

 

            Feeling very secure in my hut in Sekure, I decided maybe saving the world wasn’t going to be so bad after all, especially with Zain by my side. Feeling content, I quickly drifted off to sleep.

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On April 5th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 i really love this!!!
On February 20th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood umm WOW!!! i so love the whole fantisy thing! yay. i can't wait to read more.
On January 21st 2008 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 love it....
On January 21st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 loves it what made u choose the name Zain?
On December 1st 2007 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Fantastic! Keep me posted!
On September 6th 2007 bobwobbly Said :
bobwobbly sounds good. reminds me a bit of the style of CS Lewis' sci-fi trilogy. OOOh! and I smell romance??? I love a good strong handsome hero.
On September 3rd 2007 lostwriter Said :
lostwriter I love this! Again great detail! It reminds me a bit of a wrinkle in time! Strange book, but I love this!
On August 16th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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i like it...
On July 23rd 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang weird start up,, hmmm,,, i was like,, woah,,, this is strange!, strange-kewl!,, yeah yeah,, read on read on,, hmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,,, lol,, it's kinda funny in a way how u put it and the elements talking,,,,, i like the thought tho,,, very superb,,,it's pretty craxy in here,,,, i like it,, kewl,, keep it up!~~~~~~~~~~~Pang ^_^
On July 21st 2007 Myst222 Said :
Myst222 you have an incredible imagination. I have never been so drawn in by a story on here. good job!
On July 20th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings wow! i love it! cant wait for the next!!
On July 20th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 wow thats very good
On July 19th 2007 KiddieWishes Said :
KiddieWishes haha, keep meh updated.[:
On July 19th 2007 TinaWilly Said :
TinaWilly wow. really good.
On July 19th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said :
pinkpanther93 wow finally an elemental story with a hero..my favorite lol
On July 19th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter wonderful work keep me posted
On July 19th 2007 Oddessy65 Said :
Oddessy65 It's great, keep me posted! *~xODDx~*
On July 19th 2007 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 ahhhhh so awsome...woooo! cant wait for more!
On July 19th 2007 Tigga16 Said :
Tigga16 I love how you described the elements! and Zain sounds very attractive ^_^ I can't wait to read more!!!...yes it is VERY addictive
On July 19th 2007 MangoXCaffeine Said :
MangoXCaffeine this is the most intriguing story I have ever read so far. ^__^ keep me posted,please!
On July 19th 2007 Chelsea12093 Said :
Chelsea12093 ITS SOOOO ADDICTING!!!!!!!! please keep me updated!!=)