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Eclipsed: Part One

Drama Created on 7-17-07 Views(698) Story Rating G

           

            “Myra Elise Watson, turn off the TV! It’s time for bed!” my mother screamed at me from somewhere in the house.

 

            “But mom!” I yelled back, “The show just started getting interesting!”

 

            “Don’t ‘but mom’ me, missy! You know you’re supposed to be up in your room with the lights off by eleven. Especially since tomorrow is your first day of school!”

 

            “Fine...” I gave in; fighting with her would only get me into trouble, which I seemed to be getting into a lot lately.

 

            I lazily pulled myself up off the couch and turned off the television. If I can’t watch TV I’ll just surf the internet instead I decided, She can’t hear the internet. Laughing at that thought, I ran up the stairs to my room.

 

            As soon as I reached my room I closed the door and locked it. That way, if my mom decided to come up and check on me she’d have to knock first, giving me time to turn off the monitor before opening the door.

 

            I sat down on my computer chair and turned on the computer. After all the humming and buzzing subsided, I logged in. Hmm where should I go first? I asked myself after I opened up a webpage. I decided to go look at all the artwork posts on testriffic.

 

            I loved art; all the creativity and talent could keep anyone occupied for hours.

 

            Scrolling through the newest posts I found a picture that caught my interest. It was a cleverly strewn by two photos, one of the moon and the other of the sun. They were carefully crafted together to create one image: half moon and half sun. As I pondered the illustration I found my self looking out my window.

 

            I was expecting to see the normal dark purple sky speckled with sparkling stars, but what I saw was nothing of the sort. The sky had turned a bright orange-yellow and was shared by both the sun and the moon. It looked like a dream, with pink swirling clouds slowly drifting by as blue and purple stars spotted and shined in the sky. The sun was a bright white still, but the moon had turned blue and purple along with the stars. I was mesmerized, but in a flash that beautiful sky was gone.

 

            In its place the sky became dark and spun with red and black, a pure depiction of evil. The sun and moon were gone, along with the stars and clouds.

 

            I looked around trying to find out what happened, but the safety of my room had disappeared. Instead, I was sitting on a rock in a dark and desolate place. Trees were burnt up all around me and there wasn’t any grass or flowers covering the ground, it was only dirt.

 

            I stood up and looked all around, finding nothing more than burnt up trees and dead earth. What happened? Where am I? I wondered.

 

            “You’re in Sekure” A robotic voice behind me replied to my thoughts, as I quickly spun around in surprise.

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On April 5th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 dude!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
On February 20th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood whoa. thats cool. kmp
On January 21st 2008 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 interesting. kmp
On January 21st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 whoa that left me in a daze
On December 1st 2007 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 This is cool! What happens next? Keep me posted! Also, I have a story called The Traveler. Read, rate, and comment please!
On September 8th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 wow!
On September 6th 2007 bobwobbly Said :
bobwobbly Kay, that was kinda sudden... but a good start. sounds interesante.
On September 3rd 2007 lostwriter Said :
lostwriter I love all the detail! It's a brilliant story so far.
On August 16th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
my picture
whoa
On August 16th 2007 FreakinLlama Said :
FreakinLlama I like it so far. I think I'll read more.
On August 9th 2007 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 sounds really cool
On July 21st 2007 Myst222 Said :
Myst222 awesome!!!
On July 21st 2007 gabbytas Said :
gabbytas wow cool story cant wait to see how it ends
On July 20th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 wow thats very good very interesting to
On July 19th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie I loved it, itz like im there watching it very descriptive! KUDOS
On July 19th 2007 Jush Said :
Jush loved it! nothing more to say. keep me updated. =]
On July 19th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said :
pinkpanther93 sounds interesting..keep me posted
On July 19th 2007 Chelsea12093 Said :
Chelsea12093 love the ending
On July 18th 2007 KiddieWishes Said :
KiddieWishes oooooooo...i agree with Pang.[: awesome story telling. &i rarely get into other's stories on here, but this one has caught my eye. keep meh posted ^_^
On July 18th 2007 TinaWilly Said :
TinaWilly umm. you have to be paying a lot of attention to understand. and thats really good.
On July 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang very intense ending,, ,, lol,, u know,, i rarely read other ppls's stories,, (cept of course,, Kaylan's,, lol.... ).... but interesting enough,, u painted it out very swell,, i felt,, ,like,, i was watching a anime show,, lol, specially with the beginning,,,, hmmmmmmm,, weirdness,, i might sift thru ur stories,,, ,,, sounds interesting,, and u hae a good sense of story-telling,, (plus like,, i don't have to give u heads up on misspelled words and such,, ergh,, why do i even bother with that crap?.. cuz i'm anal,, lol,, nvm,, -_-).......... great story,, let me know when the next scene comes up!!!! ^___________^~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On July 18th 2007 MangoXCaffeine Said :
MangoXCaffeine wow..that's awesome. if you want to read my story, that'd be great.
On July 18th 2007 crazkoala Said :
crazkoala very entrancing. =) keep it up, my curiosity is stoked. your wordplay is great.
On July 18th 2007 hucksgirl Said :
hucksgirl I like the plot idea. You began with very discriptive wording and poetic speech... then somewhere toward the end, you changed your tone. Not that it's bad at all, it just lacks that teeny bit of consistency. The mood is so fantasical, you should keep the wispy feel with your monologue. Great job!!
On July 18th 2007 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 wow this is soo interesting...i really like it! ^-^