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The Wizard's Curse

Something good, Something bad

Drama Created on 4-18-08 Views(121) Story Rating G

 when she saw that the face looking back at her was all beat up, she took a deep breath and tried not to cry. then, all of a sudden, she burst out crying, for she knew that her life was going down the drain in a blink of the eye.

What am I supposed to do? I've tried and that is how I got these buises.She thought with bitter running through her veins like danger in an avalanche. Then in her memory the past of last night came back to haunt her. She was just sitting on her couch and someone came through the window, to try and kill her! When she shreiked the intruder covered her mouth, only to have her bite his hand. Then it was his turn to shreik in pain and fear, right?Oh well, she brushed that thought from her head. He deserved it. then when the only hing that she could do was yell, she didn't for she was paralyzed, for she knew who her attacker was. "How could you... you.. monster!" She then kicked him in the crotch when he backed away in surprise that she knew who her attacker was.

"Ow," her attacker howled in pain, like an animal in a trap, "why did you do that, Sarah?! Now you will feel the pain that I just felt, you slut!" Sarah was not a slut, and for those words he would pay!

"To think that I trusted you,-"

tell me how you like it and i will probably continue

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On August 10th 2008 brokenvampire1 Said :
brokenvampire1 continue please =] the clown in the corner scares me i hate clowns =[
On May 31st 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 It's good. KMP. plz
On May 31st 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 wow... you definately need to continue!! good writing style!!
On May 10th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh thx for the compliments and i am still thiking avout continueing
On May 8th 2008 davesz Said :
davesz I'd love to know how they know each other, and why the attacker was surprised that she knows him, etc. And of course, the outcome of this event. You've got my attention.
On May 1st 2008 imnotgay90 Said :
imnotgay90 it sounds very interesting. i like it so far you should write more. if you decide to write more, kmp plz!
On April 18th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh tell me how you lke it plz