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The old life and house....intro |
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Teenage Dragonhood 5 |
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Chapter 3 The BargainHow was she supposed to get out of this rat hole if she couldn’t even get away from the creature in the dark? Grandma, where are you? Please answer me, please, I'm scared and sorry. Are you listening, grandma? Please answer, I'm sorry! I didn’t mean for this to happen, I thought that I could go at it alone without help and I was wrong, so wrong! Please forgive me grandma, please?No you’re not! I bet that you even planned this, Konya! I tried to tell you but you wouldn’t listen! Now look where you have gotten us! I tried to tell you, but no, don’t listen to your grandma! You should’ve listened to me!Grandma, is that you? I'm so sorry grandma; I didn’t want this to happen to you. I didn’t even want you be dragged into this. I thought that I was Mrs. Know-it-all and I'm sorry. Do you forgive me? Please? Konya got the feeling that that wasn’t the only thing that was bothering her in her mind. She just needed a thing or person to direct her anger at. She is just like me,Yes I do forgive you but we have to get out of here first, okay? Good. Now, do you have an escape plan? Oh yah, good job on the creature in the dark, even though I wasn’t too happy about how you blew apart the house. I'm sorry that I yelled at you earlier, I didn’t mean it, I was-Under control of the creature in the dark, I understand. Can we call the creature in that dark his real name, Siena Ca? Good. I'm glad about that aren’t you? And I'm sad that I dragged you in to this with me. I never should’ve disobeyed you and kept it from you.Yes we should but remember what happened last time that we used his name? We almost got killed because of your foolishness! Now look where we are, we are in the very dungeon of the creature in the dark!To think that I trusted you to the point where I showed you how I couldn't see my own reflection! How did I know that? I never remember anything after I black out like I do! How did I remember that, I never do? You really don’t sound like my grandmother I knew, who are you?I am your grandmother, but I have been possessed for the past twelve years, ever since you came to live with me. I might as well tell you the whole truth. When you were young your mom and dad got killed by Siena Ca, he wanted to kill you but your mom went ahead and made a spell to protect you on her will. Even though I told her not to, I was under the control of the creature in the dark, so I told her not to, but she went ahead anyway. In her will it said that you were to come live with me, the will also said that if any harm should come to you they would come back from the dead and kill me. Knowing your mother, I tried to talk her out of it, but she wouldn’t hear of it. So of course the creature in me got mad and took complete control of me, so that I couldn’t do anything without his permission. When you finally arrived, I thought that I was seeing things, so I fought the urge to kill you like the creature in the dark wanted. It was hard to defeat it, but I succeeded, and now you are alive to this day, so you should be thanking me, not being mean to me! Now, do you have any powers that can get us out of this…? Gray, dark, and evil bearing place?It was true that the place was gray, dark and evil bearing. Surprisingly, Konya was not afraid of this place. It almost seemed like she knew this place. How could this place be like the one in her dream? No, it wasn’t possible, was it? No, actually it is because of what I did at the house, you know how I blew the house apart, that he power locked it. Power locked means that he put a spell on the cell, so that if I use any magic, it absorbs it and takes it away from me.“Well, well, well, what do we have here? I do believe that we have caught one big fish, huh, Siena ca?” when Konya and her grandmother heard that their breath got caught in their throats, like when a whale goes under water. “What are we gonna do with them.”“Well I for one was planning on killing them, but they might be of use to me, Onna, what do you think? Well we could make a bargain, couldn’t we?”“Yes we could, couldn’t we? You’re a genius, Siena Ca,” his voice full of praise for his master, like a dog trying to please his owner. “Well, let’s see what they think. Yoo hoo, get up you bumbling idiots! We want to see what you think of our proposition, right, Siena Ca?”“Yes onna, now here is our proposition Konya. We-“A new voice erupted from the noise, like somebody screaming for no reason; it made them all jump and turn to the new voice. “We shall never make a deal with you, you creature! Tell them Konya.” There was a pause and some whispering going on above what was happening,” what do you mean that we should hear what they say first!? I know that just because I was controlled by Siena Ca doesn’t mean that I'm gonna go too far, does it?” there was some more whispering going on. “I know that I was controlled by the creature in the dark, that doesn’t mean that you can already say bad stuff about me! And besides that you didn’t even notice that I was possessed by Siena Ca!”
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| On May 10th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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great job kmp |
| On April 22nd 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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thx i really aprrciate that and i will keep you posted |
| On April 22nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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I didn't comment the others but great job btw :) |
| On April 12th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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thx |
| On April 9th 2008 Teliana Said : | |
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I really this one |


