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+ 1	The sun sets it on fire
+ 3	10 steps to too late: part 2
+ 4	10 steps to too late

    Hazel stormed down the stairs with Alec chasing after her. "Hay, don't be like this we can always fix it!" He called after her. " She turned around furiously "Alec, that was my sister! What other way can I be like!!!" She continued storming away, she got to the bottom of the steps and stomped out the door onto the side walk. "She looked just like you ...you guys look like twins for goodness sakes." She turned around with a look on her face that just screamed 'what is wrong with you' "She's 5 years younger than me and her hair colour is purple...how does that look like me!!!!!" She started walking across the street. Alec looked to the left and shouted "Hazel stop!!!!!!" "your a jerk!" she called back "leave me alone!" "Hazel I mean it sto-" A car out of the blue flew by and hit her in the back not bothering to stop any time soon, followed by 6 police cars 2 of which stopped by her and the rest avoiding and continuing to chase. 

"oh my god...Hazel" he whispered to himself. He ran over to her lifeless cold body. A police officer slammed his door shut and ran over to help. 

    Alec ran back the the New York city apartment, back to his room, and in his dressor. Careful not to wake up Melody. He reached in his dressor and pulled out his gun. "what are you doing?" Melody walked out the bathroom and asked. Hunched over his gun he quietly and quickly replied "youkilledhazelandnowwe'llneverseeheragainallbecauseofyou,youstupidslut."  She let out a giggle, "what was that?" He turned around this time exposing his gun .  "you killed Hazel!"  he shouted pointing his gun at her.  She laughed once again, "silly Hazel isn't dead she's at work...is this a joke cuz it isn't funny...at all." He became even more angry. "Just shut up!! Just shut up!" he said busting out in tears. "Alec are you oka-" he pulled the trigger shooting her in the head, she fell back on the floor while a pool of blood surrounded her. The police outside heard the gun shot and called for back up. Alec knew already. Already in tears he pointed the gun in his mouth and fired.

to be continued... 

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