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 Created on 3-23-07
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It Ends with a Broken Beer Bottle
There is a dog barking at the end of his leash
There is a kid laying in his bed
A wife crying
A husband drinking
It's all the same
The life of her
This girl, she knows what's bad
She knows her mothers face shouldn't be black and blue
That her brother should have a smile on his face, not a razor to his wrist
That her dad should be happy
Not crazy
Not mad
She knows that she shouldn't be touched
That she should say something
But him, and that dog, they both control them all
Her brother
Her mother
And herself
Her dad won't let her mother go out
Her dad won't stop drinking
Her dad won't let her brother go out
Her dad is angry
Her dad won't let her go out
He's mad
furious
insane
Bloodshot eyes of rage
Breath the stench of liquor
Her dad doesn't belong in her room at night
Her dad doesn't need to hit her mother
To hate the boy
But to love the dog
He loves his dog
The one that snarls out back
It's spitting mad
As crazy as him.
The dog is the only thing he loves
The dog is all that he really cares for
The rest he hates
His wife
His son
His daughter
Why does he do what he does
The boy Cries
The wife cries
The girl cries
The boy is hit, yelled, cut, burned by his dad
The wife is raped, scarred
The girl is all of those and more
One time she tried to escape
The little girl new all of this was wrong
She tried to run
To get away from it all
But the dog had caught her
Brought her to her knees
Ripped at her
Made her bleed
She only has five fingers now
On her one hand
The dog ate the rest
Is this what life has to be
Beatings
Rape
Depression
Why does he do what he does
He tells them it's their fault
That he's doing this too them because they made him
Because they got him fired
They got his car wrecked
The bills go up
All that's left is money for his beer
The girl
The boy
The wife
They don't eat
They watch him eat
One time he caught the boy trying to get some food
The boy can't see now
He beat him blind
They are all crippled in one way or another
The girl, five fingers one hand
The boy blind
The wife her legs are broken
The dad he tells her it's so she can't run away from him
The used to have a little sister
The boy and the girl
She was a baby when this all started
How she died
Thrown against the wall
The dad was mad
It was the baby's fault he had yelled
It wouldn't stop crying
The had burred her out back
Her bones are still there
Beneath what used to be a garden
What used to have flowers
But there all gone now
Torn up by the dog
They all sleep in different rooms
The wife stays in her bed
Not moving, not talking
There used to be screams from her room at night
Now their aren't any
Sometimes the girl wonders if she is still alive
The boy, sometimes he hurts, he needs to yell to have the pain go away
The dad will beat him more is he does
He broke his arm once
The boy did, the dad had broke it
It hadn't healed right
Now shorter then the other
Out of place
Angled wrong
The girl at night
She cries softly
Because she knows the shadow beneath the door is her drunken dad
Just waiting to have sex with her
Against her will
She used to scream
She used to kick
She used to try to get him off
But he was too big
To strong
Now every day she grows weaker
And it's easier for him
This all started so long ago
They all wish they were dead
Why does he do what he does?
The girl doesn't remember happiness
Doesn't remember having a smile
On her face
On her mothers
On her brothers
On her fathers
She can only remember hate
Anger
Depression
Tonight though
Before the dad comes
She will end it
She hid a broken bottle of glass beneath her tattered pillow
She has been resting
Trying to gain as much strength as she can
To stab him
To cut into his neck when he comes into the room
To make him bleed
To make him cry
For all that he did to them
to her
and then, she do it more and more and more
stabbing and cutting and drowning him in his own blood
ripping at his flesh with the bottle
tearing him open
making him cry
making him weep
killing him
making him die
then she'll feed him to his dog
the one he loves so much
throw his body to it
the dog starved
almost as much as the mother, the brother, the little girl
and with all these thoughts
Something comes that was never expected
a smile
Happiness
Serenity
tonight, is the last night
tonight is a good night
tonight her dad dies
his blood pouring over her stained sheets
stained with her blood
tonight it ends with a broken beer bottle.
There is a dog barking at the end of his leash
There is a kid laying in his bed
A wife crying
A husband drinking
It's all the same
The life of her
This girl, she knows what's bad
She knows her mothers face shouldn't be black and blue
That her brother should have a smile on his face, not a razor to his wrist
That her dad should be happy
Not crazy
Not mad
She knows that she shouldn't be touched
That she should say something
But him, and that dog, they both control them all
Her brother
Her mother
And herself
Her dad won't let her mother go out
Her dad won't stop drinking
Her dad won't let her brother go out
Her dad is angry
Her dad won't let her go out
He's mad
furious
insane
Bloodshot eyes of rage
Breath the stench of liquor
Her dad doesn't belong in her room at night
Her dad doesn't need to hit her mother
To hate the boy
But to love the dog
He loves his dog
The one that snarls out back
It's spitting mad
As crazy as him.
The dog is the only thing he loves
The dog is all that he really cares for
The rest he hates
His wife
His son
His daughter
Why does he do what he does
The boy Cries
The wife cries
The girl cries
The boy is hit, yelled, cut, burned by his dad
The wife is raped, scarred
The girl is all of those and more
One time she tried to escape
The little girl new all of this was wrong
She tried to run
To get away from it all
But the dog had caught her
Brought her to her knees
Ripped at her
Made her bleed
She only has five fingers now
On her one hand
The dog ate the rest
Is this what life has to be
Beatings
Rape
Depression
Why does he do what he does
He tells them it's their fault
That he's doing this too them because they made him
Because they got him fired
They got his car wrecked
The bills go up
All that's left is money for his beer
The girl
The boy
The wife
They don't eat
They watch him eat
One time he caught the boy trying to get some food
The boy can't see now
He beat him blind
They are all crippled in one way or another
The girl, five fingers one hand
The boy blind
The wife her legs are broken
The dad he tells her it's so she can't run away from him
The used to have a little sister
The boy and the girl
She was a baby when this all started
How she died
Thrown against the wall
The dad was mad
It was the baby's fault he had yelled
It wouldn't stop crying
The had burred her out back
Her bones are still there
Beneath what used to be a garden
What used to have flowers
But there all gone now
Torn up by the dog
They all sleep in different rooms
The wife stays in her bed
Not moving, not talking
There used to be screams from her room at night
Now their aren't any
Sometimes the girl wonders if she is still alive
The boy, sometimes he hurts, he needs to yell to have the pain go away
The dad will beat him more is he does
He broke his arm once
The boy did, the dad had broke it
It hadn't healed right
Now shorter then the other
Out of place
Angled wrong
The girl at night
She cries softly
Because she knows the shadow beneath the door is her drunken dad
Just waiting to have sex with her
Against her will
She used to scream
She used to kick
She used to try to get him off
But he was too big
To strong
Now every day she grows weaker
And it's easier for him
This all started so long ago
They all wish they were dead
Why does he do what he does?
The girl doesn't remember happiness
Doesn't remember having a smile
On her face
On her mothers
On her brothers
On her fathers
She can only remember hate
Anger
Depression
Tonight though
Before the dad comes
She will end it
She hid a broken bottle of glass beneath her tattered pillow
She has been resting
Trying to gain as much strength as she can
To stab him
To cut into his neck when he comes into the room
To make him bleed
To make him cry
For all that he did to them
to her
and then, she do it more and more and more
stabbing and cutting and drowning him in his own blood
ripping at his flesh with the bottle
tearing him open
making him cry
making him weep
killing him
making him die
then she'll feed him to his dog
the one he loves so much
throw his body to it
the dog starved
almost as much as the mother, the brother, the little girl
and with all these thoughts
Something comes that was never expected
a smile
Happiness
Serenity
tonight, is the last night
tonight is a good night
tonight her dad dies
his blood pouring over her stained sheets
stained with her blood
tonight it ends with a broken beer bottle.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2007 username685 Said : | |
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wow thats really good i like the ending |
| On April 18th 2007 Twiggin Said : | |
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meh. i thought it sucked. |
| On April 8th 2007 crissy31790 Said : | |
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i thought that it was really good. i love how it ends.
`~Crissy~ |
| On March 31st 2007 lunabear56 Said : | |
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That is an awsome story, I think it's the best one I've read so far.GREAT JOB |
| On March 29th 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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thats really sad, and towards the end pretty intense. i liked it a lot. good job. |
| On March 23rd 2007 luvgoober07 Said : | |
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That was really good. Almost to the point of crying, but you knew it would end good. Nice Job! |
| On March 23rd 2007 emster1234 Said : | |
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coooooooool
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| On March 23rd 2007 emster1234 Said : | |
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coooooooool
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| On March 23rd 2007 Unperfection Said : | |
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WOW! that is amazing! it kills me juss knoing that there really are people in this world that live like that! little gurls that are raped, beaten, abused! some that believe it really is their fault and that it is ok that they deserve to die! god, that story made me cry!!! please read my poems and tell me what u think of them. |
| On March 23rd 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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Wow. You did a good job. I felt for the girl, for the family. When she said she was going to stab her father, it made me want it to happen, to see her have revenge for all he had done to them. Yes, I am impressed. It's interesting. It reads almost like a poem, but not quite. It's not easily categorized and I like that. |
| On March 23rd 2007 klynne06 Said : | |
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thats really intense and touching!extremely sad though. |
