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That one girl (part 11)

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         The moment she agreed to a date I knew I had made Mathew jealous. Very proudly I walked up to my door and twisted the knob, and sure enough as I entered Mathew was laying on the couch flipping through channels. "What the fuck are you smiling at?" Mathew asked while turning his attention away from the tv. "Wouldn't you like to know," I answered smirking. "Let me guess you finally decided to come out of the closet , right?" he asked while bursting into laughter.

        That last comment infuriated me. "No, as a matter of fact I have a date tonight Mr. Mathew," I said in a smart tone. "Ha, Mr. Mathew , I knew you was queer ," he replied mocking me. "Mathew you are such an immature little shit!" I yelled crossing my arms. "What are you going to do to me now , hurt me again?" he asked with his face filling with anger. "No , better than that I am going to now go on a date tonight with your little crush , Claire," I said shining a bright smile. Suddenly the smile on his face broke lose and he now wore a look of pure rage. "Hell no, you did not just say you were going on a date with , Claire, did you?" he repeated.

         "What if I said I was ?" I told him. "Well first of all I would have to say you were full of shit," he said rolling back over laughing. "Mathew , you will just have to see when seven rolls around," I said heading towards my room. "Yeah , Listen Nate, bud, its been over two months and that hot bitch never went on a date with me," he said. "Yeah well a woman will only date a man, and Mathew that is something you are not," I replied walking proudly up the stairs. "More like a child molester," he said chuckling. Why that little shit has to get the last word in , I will never know.

       As I walked in the direction of my room I suddenly stopped and wandered aloud," I am only three years older." Oh well whatever Mathew thought was just jealousy talking , and that is just what I was aiming for. It seemed like time wasw just flying by and I was already dressed and waiting outside on Claire. "Nate!" Yelled a voice from across the road. My eyes felt like they were going to fall right out of my head when I caught a glimpse of her. She was beautiful, she reminded me of an angel. She was dressed in a tight blue jean skirt with a low-cut top, that revealed her bulging breast. My mouth began to water as I drank her in.

         No wander Mathew was after this girl , she seemed even more appealing than Kalena did. "Hey Nate I know we are just going to have so much fun!" she yelled running up to me and hugging me tight. All of a sudden I felt a feeling of guilt rush over me, because I knew I was attending this date for all the wrong reasons. I carefully turned my frowned upside down and grabbed her hand. I opened the car door for her and then I got in. As I started the ignition I could still the breath from her nervous little body. I too, was quite a bit nervous , so I clicked on the radio. "You look very georgous tonight, Claire," I said looking at her. Her eyes lit up and she smiled real big.

       "Oh Nate, you look very ravishing yourself," she said with a grin. It grew later and soon we arrived at the movies. We were both going to view some scary movie. As we pulled up I walked over to her door and opened it, and I grabbed her hand and led her inside. I myself, had never actually experienced being this close with a girl at the movies. As the movie got a little more intense I could feel the heat off her body while we sat seat by seat with hand in hand. A few very scary things happened and I could feel her little body jerk and her hand tighten, which made me kind of giggle.

         Every word she said to me made me blush, and I truley have never felt this way around Kalena before. "Oh Nate I am getting kind of tired," she said blinking her eyes repeatly trying to keep awake. "Oh , You can lay your head on my shoulder babe," I replied with a smile. She blushed and cuddled up to my shoulder. Very shortly I could feel her breathing speeding up and I could tell she dozed off. It didn't really bother me , because she looked so damn cute asleep. At this very moment I cut all thoughts of Mathew out of my head. The movie finally ended and I was left to interupt the cute little nap Claire had been taking. "Claire , hun ," I said shaking her a little.

          She finally opened her eyes and blinked a couple of times. "OMG , Nate I am so sorry I fell asleep!" she said sounding upset. "Its ok you reminded me of an angel laying there all cuddled up on my shoulder," I told her. She smiled and grabbed my hand. We then walked to the car and I let her in one final time. When we arrived to my house I decided to park at my house and then walk her home. When we exited the car I noticed that the window blinds raised quickly , but I didn't see anyone. I felt her body shaking as I took her home. "Here take my jacket," I replied handing her my jacket. She smiled and took it willingly. "Oh Nate I just wanted to tell you thank you for this lovley night," she said releasing her grip.

       The sparkle in her eyes and glow of the moon on her soft blonde hair, made me swoop down and kiss her on the cheek. Claire however pushed my lips to her lips and we kissed for what seemed like minutes, and finally we were apart. "Goodnight Mathew," she replied walking in her house and shutting the door behind her. "Goodnight," I whispered back to the shut door. When I turned around I saw the window blinds shut really quickly and I had noticed someone was watching us.

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On September 7th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap oooh i love it!!
On September 7th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 oooh sweet!i love this!
On September 5th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 whoa she just called him matthew i like claire and nate together she's better for him then kalena
On September 4th 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 wait did she just call nate mathew or was that just a type-o? great so far
On September 4th 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 LoVe It. But wait, what happened to his punishment???
On September 4th 2008 greenytoo Said :
my picture
ooh KMP!
On September 4th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i think that claire and nate are good together. and let matt have his fun with Kalena. she's just going to dump him for an older guy prob.
On September 4th 2008 beccaemoboo Said :
beccaemoboo kl. good job
On September 4th 2008 taraluvsjosh19 Said :
taraluvsjosh19 i love it
On September 4th 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 aha awhh man screw kalena. claire and nate belong together =D and pshh ahaaa matthew! thats what he gets. =p kmpp =] ♥
On September 4th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony Nice! It's nice when things go to plan. Claire sounds really nice. ;D
On September 3rd 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany love it
On September 3rd 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 i love this story and i think claire is better for mathew then kalena!!