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That one girl (part 10)

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Drama Created on 9-1-08 Views(192) Story Rating PG13

        The site of Kalena Rose standing on my front porch made my heart skip a beat. I suddenly moved aside and allowed her to enter the house, still neither of us spoke. Finally I managed to speak, "If you want to go see Mathew he is upstairs." "Nate, that is not why I'm here I just wanted to talk with you," she said leading herself to the couch. My mind quickly raced with an on going question that filled my mind," why does she wanna talk to me??" I then turned and took a seat beside her on the couch.

        All of a sudden her serious expression grew to a look of anger, and she back handed me right across the cheek. "What the hell is your fucken problem Nate!" she shouted standing up. "What are you talking about?" I asked rubbing my cheek where she slapped me at. "Why can't you accept the fact that Mathew and I have been dating?" she asked. My face suddenly flushed red. "He never told me that you two were dating," I said while gritting my teeth. "Yeah, whatever , Nate, we have been dating for over three weeks," she said placing her hands on her hips. Oh fate was definatley tempting me, because I wanted to race up those squeaky steps, and beat the shit out of Mathew , again. The only thing that was really stopping me , was the fact that I might go to far.

          "Ok whatever," I said throwing my hands in the air. "She then turned the other direction going into Mathew's room. That little shit was really eating at my patience. I decided to go for a walk outside, which was the only thing stopping me from tearing Mathew apart. The weather was nice and cool, but the only thing I really saw was the gray clouds that flooded my mind. I could be over reacting about this whole thing, I mean how stupid is it to have a crush on a girl who don't give a shit about you. As I paced around the yard my eyes suddenly landed on the neighbor girl, Claire. She was definatley beginning to bloom like a woman now, and yes this was the girl Mathew had been chasing.

         I quickly walked towards her , but as I came closer, my eyes began to scan all over her body. She was definaltley a site, her beautiful long flowy blond hair fell down across her back in a loose ponytail, and her body was definatley taking the full shape of an hour glass. "Hey," I said stopping in front of her. Her lovley deep blue eyes then became troubled. "Um hi," she said clearing her throat. "Don't worry I am not at all like my inconsiderate brother, Mathew," I said extending my hand. With that remark she let out a cute little giggle. She nerviously grabbed my hand and I shook it gently. "Yeah, at first I thought Mathew liked me," she said looking at the ground.

         "Oh so you don't know," I said holding back a smile. "About what?" she asked looking uneasy. "Mathew is dating Kalena Rose, the head cheerleader," I said staring into her blue eyes. "Oh," she said with a frown. "So you mean , he was always just playing me?" she asked. "Well, it kind of appears that way, but why would he need to you are such a charming and beautiful girl," I said smiling at her. Her eyes quickly lit up. "Oh Nate, are you hitting on me?" she asked with an adorable smile. "Hmm ,, not exactly its more like asking you on a date, for tonight, um what about the movies?" I asked with a huge grin.

       "Omg !! Nate would love to!" she yelled cheerfully and with that she quickly ran inside. "See you at seven!" I shouted after her. Oh yes its true , I had arranged myself a date with Mathew's crush.

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On September 5th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 wow payback is a bitch
On September 3rd 2008 greenytoo Said :
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HAhahahaahaha!!!
On September 3rd 2008 greenytoo Said :
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HAhahahaahaha!!!
On September 3rd 2008 greenytoo Said :
my picture
HAhahahaahaha!!!
On September 3rd 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap ow ow! Way to go Nate!!
On September 2nd 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony Ohh smart guy! Love this story! ;D hehehe
On September 1st 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 he's smart!! i love it!!
On September 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess think about it though....now hes using that girl. bad for matt and Claire. only matt deserves it. hmmmmmmmmmmmm
On September 1st 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae karmas a bitch!
On September 1st 2008 harleybbyissxy Said :
harleybbyissxy omg kmp matt desirved it !!
On September 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 Wow!Karma is crazy!!!lmao I agree with everyone else.Go Nate!!!=] lol i love this!
On September 1st 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 haha thats what he gets [matthew] GO NATE! lol kmp
On September 1st 2008 XxBubblyBabexX Said :
XxBubblyBabexX Go Nate!!!!KMP?
On September 1st 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 agreed! stupid jerk! serves Mathew right
On September 1st 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 agreed! stupid jerk! serves Mathew right
On September 1st 2008 taraluvsjosh19 Said :
taraluvsjosh19 payback is a bitch