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Drama Created on 8-22-08 Views(152) Story Rating PG13

        I could feel the blood rising in to my head, as I watched my drunk ass brother exit the guest room with Kalena staggering by his side. Many thoughts were racing through my mind , but my body over powered them, and with that I ran towards him. When I got there Mathew released his grip on his beer, and I slung him down. I was in so much rage I had no idea how hard I was hitting him, it was almost as if I blacked out. I could hear the roaring and cheering of the crowd in the background, but I blocked them out, but I could also hear the screaming of Kalena, "Nate ,, stop , stop o God please stop!"

         All of a sudden I came to realization of where I was and what I was doing. I looked down to find a bloody Mathew screaming in pain as I took every hit. I was so mad I didn't even bother to stop, I was more than determined to harm Mathew very bad. All of a sudden I was jerked off him by my arms. I turned around to find Cody holding on to one of my arms and Scott grabbing the other. "What are you trying to do Nate, kill him!" Yelled Scott. My attention the turned to Kalena who was running towards Matthew to check on his injuries. "Omg , he is passed out!" cryed Kalena feeling his forehead. Cody then walked over to my injured brother.

         " Oh he will be fine he probably just consumed to much alcohol," replied Cody grabbing Mathew up in his arms. "Nate you sure as hell can't drive your brother home after this little episode it will be way to risky," said Scott grabbing the keys from my hands. "Come on I'll drive , but Nate you sit up front and Mathew can lay in the back," he said walking towards the door. I then began to cool down. My attention then turned towards my limp little brother in Cody's arms. His nose was pouring with blood, and his mouth was covered with dried blood, both his eyes were black, and he was covered in bruises.

        A flood of worry then flowed throughtout my body. "Come on Nate!" yelled Scott from outside. I then slowly walked out the door and entered the car. As I sat down I then looked back at Mathew , he was still passed out, except he was breathing extremly hard. "Nate, why did you do this!" yelled Scott as he pulled out of the driveway. "I told you that one day I would have my revenge on him , Scott," I replied trying to hide the fear in my voice. "And by that did you mean kill him," he said gripping tighter on the steering wheel. "But I.. I...," I replied stuttering.

         "You may not have , but if Cody and I hadn't of been at that party there would have been nobody to stop you!" he screamed as he pulled in my driveway. I then gulped as we pulled in. I quietly opened my door and went to Mathew's door. When I opened the door he was still very much passed out. I grabbed him up in my arms and started for the door. "Hey, Scott how are you going to get home?" I asked. "I will walk!" He yelled back. I then headed for the back door while Mathew's feet dangled in my arms. A part of me felt extremly guilty.

          As I quietly entered the house , I couldn't hear Mathew's breathing and that worried me. I decided then and there that I would do the right thing so I did, I ran to the car while putting Mathew in the backseat. I drove so fast I coudn't even hardly see anything but blurrs. When I arrived I carried him to the emergency room , and they quickly raced him to the back. My heart was pounding so hard I thought I was going to have a heart attack. I then walked over to the phone and dialed mom. "Hello?" she answered sounding sleepy. "Hey mom its me Nate," I replied with a shaky voice. "Nate! where the hell are you!" she yelled into the phone.

"Mathew got into a fight at school, and so I drove him to the hospital!" I lied. "Omg , I'm on my way!" she yelled hanging up. I then gulped , because I knew I had lied to her . The worst part is I don't even know if my brother is ok!

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On September 3rd 2008 greenytoo Said :
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OMG!!
On August 26th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 Shit i love this!i gotta kno wut happenss!
On August 24th 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay Aw ): He killed Matt?
On August 24th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony OMG! This rivalry has gotten very intense.
On August 23rd 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 oh wow!!!!!!!!! kmp plz
On August 22nd 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae uh ohhh!
On August 22nd 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 omg i hope he okay i love it
On August 22nd 2008 taraluvsjosh19 Said :
taraluvsjosh19 i hope he is ok
On August 22nd 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess omg it was just a GIRL. it was like he was possessed. i hope Matt's ok. he'll prob. like avoid Nate for a LONG time.
On August 22nd 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 oh my goodness i hope he's okay!!
On August 22nd 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany well....ok then