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That one girl (part 1)

Authors Comments: oh you guys part 2 is going to rock, , this story is Hilarious so please vote so I can post the next one fast =)
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     I watched as she swung her long appealing legs high in the air. Her slender body with knock out curves sent my mind racing with obscene thoughts. She was geourgous, she was everything, and she was 'that one girl'. "Smack." All of a sudden I was on the ground staring straight up at the sky. All I could hear was the loud roaring of laughter from my best friend Scott, he was tall and thin with wavy brown hair.

         "Ha man, I thought you would have learned by now how to dodge some balls," he said while bursting into laughter. I quickly switched my gaze to beside me and sure enough there was a football laying there. I quickly grabbed the football and tossed it back at him, except for I missed his head, well at least the head on his shoulders. He quickly kneeled to the ground grabbing his cratch gasing for air.

        "Aw , Nate what gives!" He said leaning on his knees in pain. Well anyways, let me introduce myself, my name is Nathan Ryan and everyone I know calls me Nate, I am a junior this year , which makes me 17 years old. "Yeah I guess you don't know much about dodging balls either!" I yelled back at him laughing extremley hard. "Aw speaking of balls!" He said still clutching his. Thats when we both broke into laughter almost rolling on the ground.

         "So why are you standing on this hill by yourself anyways?" He asked giving me a dumb look. "Look for yourself," I told him pointing at the beautiful girl. "Oh yeah!, I got ya man , cheerleaders!" He said nugding me in the side. "No, not just any cheerleader, but her," I said pointing at the long legged one that had caught my eye. "Dude, that is the head cheerleader," He said laughing. By the way before I reveal to much of my story, Her name is Kalena and she is part hispanic and she is absolutley stunning, Ok so now back to the story. "What are you shitheads doing up here," Called my other friend Cody walking towards us, He was very built and had straight pitch black hair.

           He could also be a real dick sometimes. All of a sudden Scott nudged Cody in the side. "Dude, Nate is like drooling over Kalena Rose," he said busting out into laughter. "MMM MMM she is indeed a fine peice of ass," replied Cody licking his lips. "Bet she has also been around a few times being the head cheerleader and all," Said Scott in a low whisper. But somehow I had managed to block them out. I was absolutly frozen solid as she did a backflip. Her long geourgous black hair just seemed to fly rapidly in the wind as she coached her squad.

        "Dude!" called Scott snapping his fingers in my face. I just continued to stare at her in admiration. "Hey , we better like get out of her before you end up with a boner," said Cody busting out in another roar of laughter. "Aw come on you guys, I really like her," I said trying to hide the embarrassment in my eyes. "Well but what you are forgetting is that she is the 'head' cheerleader," said Cody flipping out his black hair. "Hee , speaking of head , I wander if she gives it," said Scott to Cody.

        See the thing is I am not what you call popular, I would fall more into the range as normal or whatever. "Maybe you guys are right, she wouldn't be interested in a guy like me anyways," I replied staring at the ground in shame. Suddenly the cheerleaders were leaving the feild and if we didn't get out of there they would see us. "Oh shit!" yelled Cody racing off the hill. Scott and I followed quickly and soon we were all running like wild horses.

      "Well I'll catch you guys tommorrow!" I called out to them heading towards my house. On my way there I kept replaying Kalena over and over in my mind. "Shit they were probably right," I said again picking up a rock from my driveway and throwing it across the road. As I walked into the house my eyes suddly caught a glimspe of my father. "Hey, theres my boy!" he yelled jumping off the couch and giving me a bear hug and then a noogie. "What the hell dad!" I yelled twisting him into a headlock. "WOO, tough just like ya old pop," said my dad gasping for air.

       Finally I released my grip on him. My dad however he resembles a giant, he is like 6'3 feet tall and about three hundred pounds, he was also going bald and he had a beard like santa, and me I was only 5'11 feet tall and I was extremly thin, with curly black hair I had inherited from my mother. "George, leave that boy alone!" called my mother from the kitchen. "Come on, Martha ya know I was just messin with em ," my dad said wrapping my tiny and fragile mother in his huge arms. I just rolled my eyes and entered my bedroom, which was the only place I had complete privacy.

    I was all alone which gave me plenty of time to think about Kalena. "Mmm," I thought aloud while dozing off.

 

 

(Authors Note: The next chapter is HILARIOUS so make sure you guys read rate and comment =)

 

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On September 1st 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 haha luv it
On August 15th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 sounds great...cant wait to read the next chap..if you say its funny then it has to be :D
On August 10th 2008 plaballa Said :
plaballa dats a tight story ur good at dat 4 reals..
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On August 6th 2008 XoLOLAXo Said :
XoLOLAXo nice=]
On August 6th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony great story, your talent from writing from the perspective of the opposite sex is wonderful. I subscribed. hehe :D
On August 6th 2008 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 haha...i love it...kmp! =D
On August 6th 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae oooo i like it! =]
On August 5th 2008 MajorBandee Said :
MajorBandee kmp. its good.
On August 5th 2008 greenytoo Said :
my picture
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On August 5th 2008 justlikeme1569 Said :
justlikeme1569 the geek gets the popular cheerleader awe
On August 5th 2008 PuffDaddyPuff Said :
PuffDaddyPuff not a bad plot , pretty predictable, well written although i never laughed once, is this meant to be funny? i just don't get most cheesy american humour u see.
On August 5th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess lol, lmao. i wish we could just switch places for a day and see if thats how they really think, ya know? well lets see if he gets the girl. i believe im subscribed, and ur amazing stories just keep coming, idk where u get these ideas but its pretty awsome!!!!!!!!!!!
On August 5th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS lol i like it kmp!!!
On August 5th 2008 swadersm Said :
swadersm Nice!
On August 5th 2008 EricG23 Said :
EricG23 hahahaha
On August 5th 2008 bluecat62892 Said :
bluecat62892 love the story
On August 5th 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 haha this is funny already. kmp :]