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Home away from Home (part 7)

Tragedy Created on 7-13-08 Views(189) Story Rating R

         It was the moment of truth, or so I thought. I grabbed Jonah's hand and tightened my grip as I heard the roaring entrance of my Aunt Maggy. Her eyes look like they had both set on fire as her gaze was fixed deeply on my scared breathless body. "Do not move," she said as she turned away headed towards the stairway. I could already feel the tears head towards the surface. I glanced over at Jonah trying to force an unwanted smile , but it was no use.

        He noticed the pained expression written on my face, so he  threw his arms around my waist and held me close to him. Suddenly I felt as if I was loved for the first time in my life, I relaxed my body in his arms, as he cuddled me. Just the we heard a loud booming coming from the direction of the stairway. "Audrey, You little skank!" she yelled pointing her index finger in my face. She jerked me up off the couch by my wrists.

          A few seconds later after jerking me up , she grabbed Jonah's wrist and pulled him off the couch , also. "Now go upstairs Audrey , and don't even plan on coming down here anymore!" she yelled thrusting my body towards the stairway. I slowly started up the staiway with my eyes glancing back to watch her shove Jonah out the door way.

        This can't be happening! I had seemed to be a in battle that held no vicitory , and if it did the victo would be Tommy. As I came upon my room , I carefully glance inside Tommy's doorway, to find him standing there smirking. When I finally entered my room, I slammed the door. I threw myself on the bed burying myself in the covers. I had done decided that crying wouldn't make anything better, so I lay there with many thoughts intruding my pounding head.

       Oh how I hated Tommy so much! Tommy must have lied , but the worst part is my dumb founded Aunt Maggy believed him! "Its so ironic for her to believe her own son , than her unwanted neece," I explained to myself. I rolled over  , and suddenly I started dozing off, but once again my dozing off was shattered again! The door quietly squeaked open , and quickly slammed shut. I lay there pretending not to hear anything, until my shoulders were being shaken. "Audrey, Audrey," the voice called to me.

       I turned over , and saw the one and only Tommy. He was the whole damn reason I was in this horrible position. "Audrey," he repeated once more wearing that fucking stupid grin. "What do you fucking want now!" I screamed at him , burying my face in the pillow to hide the tears that were trying to expose theirselves. "I want you , Audrey," he said plopping down beside me. He grabbed my wrists , and flipped my body back over pinning me down. "AUNT MAGGY!" I hollered with every intention to get him caught.

     "She isn't here , Audrey," he said grinning. "Where is she?" I asked with tears streaking my pale face. "She is with her boyfriend," he said looking away. "Her boyfriend!" I shouted , but this time in anger. He removed himself from on top of me, and out of nowhere , he began shedding tears himself."Audrey, ever since you entered this house I actually felt as if I had someone I could depend on," he said gazing down at me.

        "Tommy you don't have to rape me to get my love," I said hopefully. "I know , BUT IT FEELS SO DAMN GOOD, Audrey," he said grinning. He placed his body right back over mine. "Oh gosh Tommy please get up!" I panicked. "Audrey, this is the only thing that makes me happy," he said.  I leaned back trying to squirm lose, but he was just to strong.

        I even tryed to dig my nails into his back , but this seemed to only urge him on. I just finally decided to lay there , and resist. After he was done he my neck , walked out of my room. I curled up , and started to cry. I was so trapped! I decided it was time to take some kind of action. I was done with this constant torture. I walked over to my window and slowly began rasing it, just enough to where I could lean out. I slowly raised it up all the way up quietly , so Tommy wouldn't hear. I sat myself on the sill just plotting my escape. Tonight I was going to find peace once and for all!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Authors note: I'm am sorry it took, so long to repost , but for some reason this story just seemed to disappear.. so I rewrote it , but don't worry its the same story just wrote a little different , and im sorry for the inconvience. =)

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On July 14th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony Great writing! I hope she escapes. kmp :D
On July 14th 2008 JasmineMCRmy Said :
JasmineMCRmy wow kmpp!
On July 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I read this story before but it is so sad.. [you dont have to kmp because i subcribe this] thanks
On July 14th 2008 emoprincessXD Said :
emoprincessXD kmp i really like this
On July 14th 2008 emoprincessXD Said :
emoprincessXD kmp i really like this
On July 14th 2008 ChiCkASOFLy Said :
my picture
itsz ok kmp me posted
On July 13th 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 I just read all this story. Well of what you have anyway. And I love it. It's great. Keep Me Posted Please
On July 13th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i know i should be happy for her, but i just wish that her and tommy could work things out. I mean like wouldnt it be better to have a person there to comfort you then to take away HER happiness and make HER suffer WITH him. But she has to do what she has to do, hopefully she knows where jonah lives. PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!! this story is AMAZING
On July 13th 2008 ray7chel Said :
ray7chel this is good. kmp.
On July 13th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott yeh she does need to get the hell out of there cuz i know how it feels to get raped like that exept i was a lot younger anywoo u told me to comment on the story and vote again so i did it =] cuz i want to keep reading it =]
On July 13th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 Im glad you found it. I was wondering were it went. Goodjob, she needs to get out of there
On July 13th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 its good and sad kmp
On July 13th 2008 mysterywhateve Said :
mysterywhateve Please keep me post thanx