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Tragedy Created on 7-8-08 Views(213) Story Rating R

       While being lifted over Tomm'y shoulders I started to panick! I opened my mouth to let out a scream, but I was stopped by Tommy cupping my mouth with his hand. "If you bring mom up here I swear!" He whispered in my ear. Sunddenly my tears starting flowing , dripping on Tommy's shirt. He walked to his door and flung me down on his bed. He quickly ran to the door and locked it, so I couldn't escape. I got up off the bed and ran around the room crying histerically hoping that Tommy wouldn't be able to catch me.

       "Come back here you little bitch!" he screamed. Suddenly my ankle began to cramp and I tripped. Tommy ran to wear I was and scooped me back up and slung me on his bed once again. This time he pinned my wrists down. "Tommy why can't you just leave me alone?" I asked trying a new strategy. "Tea cakes you have to be taught in the correct way," he said with that bullshit of a grin. I suddenly became angry and shouted at him, "Tommy I don't fucking need you to teach me anything." I squirmed aound trying to break free , but he grew angry and tightened his grip.

         He jerked down my pants, then my panties. "Tommy! No!" I screamed. "Shut the fuck up bitch!" He yelled. My eyes were burning with tears and I became frustrated. He now brought his self directly on top of me and started to kiss my neck. My body started giving off different reactions and I felt myself getting wet. "Tommy please don't do this to me," I begged him. "You know you want it ,Audrey, I can tell," he said puching his manly part inside of me.

        I leaned my head against his pillow and began to moan in agony! Tommy didn't stop, nor did he care. Everytime I tried to scream he would cover my mouth,so i felt trapped. It hurt so bad! I could feel the ripping pain inside of me. It seemed like moments later into the process Tommy and I could hear a loud banging coming from his window. He removed himself off of me and went to the window , still pinning me down with his arms. "OMG Jonah!" I screamed when I saw him sitting in a tree outside Tommy's window. "I'm gonna kill that mother fucker!" Tommy shouted.

        Suddenly the window shattered and Jonah fell in. "Let her go you sadistic physco!" he shouted at Tommy. Tommy released his grip on me , and charged at Jonah, but this time Jonah packed the  first punch. Tommy fell back against his bed, but immediatly got up and slung Jonah down in the floor. He was punching Jonah repeatingly in the face. "Tommy stop it!" I screamed. "I'm gonna beat this fucker to a bloody pulp," he shouted. Suddenly the door was quickly unlocked from the outside and thrust open. There standing before us was my aunt maggy. She was as red as a beat, shifting her eyes from Tommy, and to bloody Jonah. "Aunt Maggy!" I yelled running to her throwing my arms around her. "What the hell is going on here!" she shouted.

      I slowly stepped to the other side of here and yelled," I fucking hate Tommy, he has done nothing , but torture me the whole time I have been here!" I shouted at her. She gazed at me with a furious face , and slowly I noticed the blood rising to her head. She moved me over and grabbed Tommy and slung him on his bed, " You fucking stay here and don't move!" she screamed. She suddenly grabbed Jonah's hand then mine and drug us both downstairs. She put us on the couch , and then she left the room heading towards the phone.

      "Are you alright?" Jonah asked me. "Yes I'm fine, but look at you!" I said wiping the blood off his face with the back of my hand. He slowly formed a small smile on his lips. "Audrey, I think I'm in love with you," He said grabbing my hand. "Oh I love you too Jonah!" I screamed throwing my arms around him. Suddenly my aunt stepped back in the room fixing her gaze on me. She was fixing to tell either good news or bad news.

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On July 13th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 kmp wow
On July 12th 2008 stephjane Said :
stephjane kmpp!!
On July 10th 2008 cuteNquiet Said :
cuteNquiet thanx and kmp it was very good i love it so much!
On July 8th 2008 emoprincessXD Said :
emoprincessXD ok wow so kmp! this is ooo goood
On July 8th 2008 StarrburstBaby Said :
StarrburstBaby Oh mann oh mann, Im addicted, I love it. I hate Tommy and Aunt Maggy is still a mystery but I love Jonah:)
On July 8th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony This is a great cliffhanger you've left us with. Finally Aunt Maggy is involved. Can't wait till the next installment. kmp
On July 8th 2008 ChiCkASOFLy Said :
my picture
kmp =] this is gudd
On July 8th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott awwwwwwwww i hate tommy but i luv jonah =]
On July 8th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 Oh man! Yey Jonah but her cousin is SICK SICK SICK !!! I don't have a good feeling about her aunt though. Keep me posted
On July 8th 2008 mysterywhateve Said :
mysterywhateve Wow interesting! kmpp
On July 8th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx WHOA! This is getting good but I hate Tommy! Jonah is such a sweet guy to protect that girl!
On July 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess the rest is:
On July 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess WOW! i cant beleive Tommy! and Jonah is SO sweet
On July 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess WOW! i cant beleive Tommy! and Jonah is SO sweet