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Home away from Home (part 4)

Tragedy Created on 7-7-08 Views(203) Story Rating R

          When I reached my room , I curled up in a ball on the floor. Minutes later my door was thrust open by Tommy. "Tea cakes I know your in here, he yelled wobbling around. I stood up and looked him in the eyes. "There you are servant!" he said. "Tommy, I don't want to be your stupid servant anymore!!" I shouted. He grabbed my wrist and slung me down on the bed, and got on top of me and held me down.

        "Your going to do what I fucking say!" He shouted. "Tommy please let go of me." I begged. He eased up off me and jerked me back into his room. I decided to just not argue and do whatever I had to do. "Hey tea cakes!" he shouted at me. Me and the guys would like to play a game with you," he said with that same wicked grin. "This game is called strip tease," he said grinning. "OH god Tommy! I don't want to play!" I cryed. They all gathered around me leaving me the sitting duck in the middle.

         "The rules are tea cakes , one of my friends are to tell you to remove any article of clothing," he said. "What about me?" I asked hoping I would have some say in it. "You just do what they say," he said impatiently. So the game was on! We went down the line and suddenly the only clothes I had on were my undergarments! I was starting to cry at this point , but it didn't stop Tommy from taking his turn. "Now take your undergarments off,"Tommy said gazing up and down my body.

        With tears streaking my face I slwly removed my bra. Every eye in the room was glued on my revealed bare breast. "Very Nice!" said Tommy smiling. I shot him a glare. "What about those panties?" they proceeded to ask me. I already knew what I had to do, so I bend down and brought my panties to my ankles. I stood there completely nude just wanting to die! I stared around the room , and noticed a few of them licking their lips greedily.Suddenly I heard a loud clapping sound coming from Tommy's direction. I felt so used and guilty.

      I bent down and grabbed my clothes and ran to my room. When I reached my room I slipped on my clothes and ran to my walk in closet, to hide away. I never thought I would have to hide again. I layed my head on my knees and continued to cry. I waited there sobbing for about an hour and still no sign of Tommy, So I walked to my door. I slowly opened the door and peeked into Tommy's room. The light were off and everyone seemed to be passed out. So I carefully climbed into bed and fell soundly asleep. The next couple days I didn't see Tommy around.

        By Monday morning it was time for me to continue school. I got myself ready and slowly walked for the door. "Hey Audrey!" screamed my aunt from the other room. "You are to ride with Tommy," she called out to me. "OH no!" I thought. I slipped my shoes and patiently stood there waiting with a look of fear written across my face. Tommy slowly walked out the door and to his car, so I had no choice but to follow him. When I got inside the car I turned my head away from his direction. "You didn't do so bad the other night," he said smiling. I began to get an uneasy feeling in my stomach. "Calm down tea cakes, I have the perfect place where we can skip, or at least be tardy. "Tommy NO! thats not right take me to school now!" I shouted at him. He slammed on the breaks and grabbed my wrists. "You are to do whatever I fucking say, remember what I told you tea cakes," he eased his grips and continued to drive to his so called secret place.

      Finally he came to a halt, and we were almost in the middle of nowhere. "Tommy what are we doing here?" I asked impatiently."I plan on teaching you the fact of life," he said with a deep stare into my eyes. "Tommy! What! what are you doing!" I screamed. He took his hand and placed it on my leg. I closed my eyes and imagined I was hiding behind that same old couch.

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On July 14th 2008 CSLuvr Said :
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omg nooo!
On July 13th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow that is sad he is so mean kmp
On July 8th 2008 AndyAnthony Said :
AndyAnthony Intense and terrible...a great story!
On July 8th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 What!!!he is her cousin! What a sick bastard
On July 7th 2008 StarrburstBaby Said :
StarrburstBaby Oh mann oh dude oh jeez he's a insane jackazz. He needs to like get the shizz beat out of him. Now I know why the husbend didnt want anymore kids after this crackpot. Im hooked though. You need to write some more:)
On July 7th 2008 ChiCkASOFLy Said :
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dam thats fucked up kmp =]
On July 7th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott oh wow wat a jackazz
On July 7th 2008 tiarenee08 Said :
tiarenee08 o wow this is sad but kmpp
On July 7th 2008 emoprincessXD Said :
emoprincessXD kill em in his sleeeeppppp! kmp!
On July 7th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wow, omg. Stupid Tommy! Gosh!
On July 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess wow i cant believe him. THATS HIS COUSIN!!! please keep me posted and please post the next one as soon as possible =]