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Home away from Home (part 2)

Tragedy Created on 7-5-08 Views(173) Story Rating PG

        Soon my Aunt Maggy came to a screeching halt, and she parked the car and allowed me to exit. "Wow!' I screamed. "Yeah, I figured you would like it dear," she said. Directlty in front of me was a huge brick house with an inground swimming pool. I stood there with my mouth wide for about five minutes just gazing at this beautiful site.

       "Come on Audrey, I want to show you your room," she said as she was leading me to the front door. "This is so different from all the other places I used to live," I told her on the way to the door. "Well I've always kind of known your mother was to irresponisible to raise a child," she said with a series tone. She opened the door and led me up a flight of stairs. There was two bedrooms right across from one another. This room over to your left is my son Tommy's. This one to my right is yours," she said with a smile. My eyes nearly popped out of my head when she opened the door.

            The room was painted a bright yellow, and There was a queen sized bed with a rainbow color bed spread. There was a widescreen tv and a huge walk in closet. "Now go check out the veiw from you window," she said with a huge grin. I slowly lifted my blinds and saw the inground pool. "OMG! its just like living in paradise," I told her. She smiled really big at that last comment.

             I walked over to the walk in closet and noticed tons of name brand clothing. "Whose clothes are these?" I asked. "Those sweetheart are yours," she said. "I'm going to run you a hot bath downstairs , so you can pick you out something to wear and meet me down there," She said exiting my room. Sitting beside my closet was a huge vanity  table. I walked over to my closet and picked me out a pretty pink sundress and carried it over to the vanity table. I lifted the dress over me and veiwed at it through the mirror on the vanity table.

           I grabbed the dress and started on my way downstairs, and thats when I saw him. There peeking around the doorway was a tall, slim boy with long neatly groomed wavy brown hair. Suddenly when I started passed his room, his door slammed shut. So I paid no mind and walked right on down stairs. When I entered the bathroom my aunt was kneeling beside the tub running my bath water. I removed my clothes and slowly stepped in the warm relaxing bath water.

             My aunt reached for the bottle of shampoo and started scrubbing my hair down with it. "I've always wanted a daughter, but after Tommy my husband didn't want anymore children," she said. After I cleansed my body I got out of the tub and dryed myself off with a towel. She carefully removed the dress from the hanger and slipped it on me. "Under all of that filth your mother allowed you to waller in you are a very pretty girl," she said. She walked with me up to my room and blow-dryed my hair and pinned it up in the back.

       When she finished doing that, she grabbed some foundation, eyeshadow, and lipstick and placed it on me. Thats when I atually felt pampered for the first time in my life. "Your just to pretty to only be thirteen," she said smiling. So I glanced in the mirror and back at my aunt. "Why did Tommy slam the door  when I walked by his room earlier?" I asked her. "Oh pay no attention to that boy, hes always like that when we have company around," she said with a warming smile.

         "I'm going to go downstairs and get dinner started , just make yourself at home," she said and turned and left my room. I walked over to my bed and closed my eyes.

          

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AndyAnthony Great descriptive writing! I could picture her bedroom very clearly! LOL! It does sound like a paradise.
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