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The Emerald Whirlwind
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 Created on 7-8-07
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It was dark, to begin with. Then darker, then blacker than black. Gradually, a green spiral became visible. Every crack of lightning seemed to bring it closer, and every deep, thunderous rumble of the storm made the twister pulsate gently.
In a flash, the spiral, which had been lingering over the ocean, lunged towards Emma's houseboat, like a tiger pouncing on its prey. The twister engulfed the houseboat within a matter of seconds, then faded away with the storm. A minute later, the sea was peaceful.
The Emerald Whirlwind had risen again.
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Please Login to post comments| On August 5th 2007 spaz007 Said : | |
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Okay, this passed my spellcheck :] |
| On July 27th 2007 eldirkomcboho Said : | |
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cool way to start a story!! it is cool and suspensful! |
| On July 26th 2007 katiemaubach Said : | |
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Ooo, very nice...I like the ending sentence, it definitely keeps the reader wanting more. Great job. Keep me posted! |
| On July 26th 2007 spaz007 Said : | |
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That was very well written!
I love writing. I don't post my stories though.
Afraid someone will steal them.
That was good! |
| On July 19th 2007 rockprincess31 Said : | |
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Woah!!! That's a very cool way to start a story!!! Keep writing and keep me posted!!! Do you think you can look at my stories too??? Pweeze? ^^ |
| On July 17th 2007 DeanCentricGal Said : | |
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thats very good! its like a teaser. just enough info to keep the reader on suspense. :] very good decriptions, you can really see what ur writing. i like it. :] keep me posted for the rest |
