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Perfect game, gone wrong.. [part 6]
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 Created on 7-6-07
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As we sat there praying that the car would start, the football team started to walk towards us. I was just praying that it would start. Jeff looked really pissed off with his gun gripped tightly in his right hand. It was no use to try to start the car anymore because Jeff was at the car tapping on it with his gun.
“Get out of the car!” he yelled.
so we did as told and got out. Cody grabbed me and took me to Jeff’s car . I was screaming the whole way to the car hoping to get someone’s attention even though we were parked away from the restaurant on the side away from everything. He threw me in Jeff’s car then climbed into the driver’s seat. I continued to scream and bang on the windows. Some of the other guys started getting into the cars to where there were only about four guys left around Tyler and Josh. Then, it happened he shot them both. All the guys took of running to the car and Mark and Jeff climbed into the car. I was crying hysterically and screaming at them. “shut the fuuck up!” Jeff yelled, turning around looking at me.“Why did you do that?” I asked sniffling in between each word.
“Because I need money and you to get that money.” He replied.
I sat there in the back seat next to Mark and continued to cry. I didn’t care anymore about doing what Jeff told me to do. I knew right then and there he wouldn’t kill me until after he had the money or if he even would kill me. Alls I knew was I had to figure out a way to get to my brother. I continued to cry and eventually cried myself to sleep. I guess I didn’t care anymore; where we were going or what was happening. I just saw two people, who were actually really nice, get shot.
sorry its short. im cant figure out where i want the story to go.
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Please Login to post comments| On July 8th 2007 nodaywithoutu Said : | |
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really good tell me when you have the next part up |
