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Love, never forgotten (Chapter 2)
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I wish that it would never end. Jakes warm arms around me. The feel of his lips against mine were finished with a knocking at the door. It was Jakes room mate. "jake, where you been?" he asked then he saw me. I pulled the blanket up over my bare breast. "I see." he said. "I better get going." I said. I walked into the bathroom and pulled on my clothes. I said goodbye to the boys and walked out. I walked down to my own dorm and sat on my bed. I longed for the feel of Jake teh way he held me. Just so warm. I layed down and dreamed of him.
I was awoken by the sound of my room mate Diana. "Where have you been?" she asked. "I've been....sleeping." i studdered. "Oh well. there's a party tonight and I was wondering. if you'd like to come. There'll be tons of hot guys there." I didn't know what to say. I only had one man in my life. "I'll think about." I said. "Come on Nat, you know you want to." She said. "Well..." i said, "I guess there's no hurt in going." I said and I hoped in my mind, "I hope Jake's there."
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| On April 21st 2008 tutorgirl22 Said : | |
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| On April 20th 2008 alday4 Said : | |
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I think the story has a very good plot but it needs alot of work some cunstructive critisism you write really well but it needs more detail and more just more. like your "chapters" should be more like paragraphs and you should stay to that topic for a while |


