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 Created on 8-22-07
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Queen Fan: ::Lucifer appeared beside her in bed:: "It seems like you got some things on your mind, i'll listen if you'dlike.." ::He smiled to her sweetly and wiped her tears:: "You don't have to cry about it, i'm sure, everything's alright.." ::Kuro sighed as he appeared on Earth, in the woods. He was relativaely close to his destination, judging on the the horrible stench of the area. It began raining, pouring, Kuro getting soaked immeidately:: "Oh prefect, a dreary day for a dreary moment huh?"
Queen Fan: (grahn now i have to brb again GRAH >.<)
Ehn Grassclan: [KK.]
Ehn Grassclan: Nullia shrugged. "He won't listen to me. You're a great guy and really cute, yeah, but I don't like you like that. No offence." She closed her eyes, letting him touch her face. "But I just don't understand why he's so angry about it. I didn't DO anything to make him mad..."
Queen Fan: (yayness)
Ehn Grassclan: [=o]
Queen Fan: "I don't take offense to things like that...i don't honestly care if people like more or not. You can't see it?" ::He smiled to himself:: "He wants attention, someone that will listen to him, and won't make fun of him if he cries, he wants someone to care and he wantsa someone to know what happened, don't you understand?? Do you see it now?" ::He smiled to her more, thinking about Kuro, how sad it was that he had tried to bottle things up, only wanting to let someone everything he went through, though he tried to stay strong and put Tenshi before himself always, make sure he was helped before himself:: "It's quite sad...if you understand him...always putting others before himself.." ::He became quiet and lowered his head. Kuro sighed as he walked through the forest, getting sick of the (c)
Queen Fan: smell.:: "Damnit, why am i being sent here?" ::He walked out, seeing the small blue-ish gray house that had held him captive for so many years. It looked like it would fall over if someone even slightly nudged it. There was someone sitting on the two steps that led up to the door:: "Oh look who came back..." ::The person giggled evilly::
Ehn Grassclan: "I'm trying to listen to him, Lucifer." She sat up, running her fingers through her hair. She kept her eyes down, staring at the sheets. "I wish he'd just sit down and talk to me. I WILL listen to him, I want to. I would never make fun of him for anything. But he needs to care about himself too. Think I can go talk to him?" She looked to Lucifer sadly, sighing.
Queen Fan: "You still don't see it....this is why i set this up....i hope you both won't be angry at me when it's finished.." ::He got up from the bed and walked out of the room and then some sort of screen type thing shot up, showing her where Kuro was, and what was going on. Kuro stared to the elf sitting there, his eyes widened in fear. His breaths shallowed and he couldn't move, but the elf walked closer to him. All that could be heard was rain around them until Kuro's eyes turned into Tenshi and he quickly began running, screaming, and crying. The ground was turning quickly to mud. Tenshi's shoes got caught and he ripped his feet from the shoes along with his socks after a few more steps. This slowed him down a lot and he screamed louder everytime his foot got stuck, until the elf finally caught
Queen Fan: (c)
Queen Fan: up and smacked him to the ground and Tenshi began clawing at it as the elf drug him back to the house, his nails popping off in the mud, making them bleed as he began screaming bloody murder, He was so pale from fear. His heart felt like it was going to give out. The elf drug him back into the house and reshackled him:: "Looks like your mine, i was very bored without you, you know" Tenshi curled into a ball and cried loudly.:: "Looks like the mud has made you very dirsty...how about we give you a bath, hmm?" ::Tenshi eyes widened as he kicked and screamed, squirming and yelling, stuff that sounded like 'no!' and other types of objections, The cries blood curdling. The inside of the house was terrible, blood everywhere. Handprints of tiny children and the bloodied handprints of adults and(c
Queen Fan: teenagers. There was an axe sticking out from the wall, a tiny piece of flesh held against the wall by it, the missing tip of their ear. Tenshi tried to hold onto the wall as he was drug to the bathroom, leaving bloody fingerprints from where his nails had popped off. In the bathroom, there wasa single tub with a woman in it, full of her own blood. Her eyes cut out, blood trikling from her eye sockets like they were her tears. Her arm hung over the side, her hand laying limp on the floor. The floor seemed to havea coating of water and and blood. Tenshi was drug through it and thrown against the wall with a loud smack and he cried loudly, trying his hardest to press against the wall, as if it were going to protect him:: "Stand up...I SAID STAND UP!" ::He smacked him and TEnshi quickly (c)
Queen Fan: scrabmled to his feet:: "HANDS AGAINST THE WALL!" ::Tenshi did it quickly as well and the elf walked over ripping off his shirt and ran his fingers down Tenshi's cold scars on his back:: "Looks like you're overdue...don't worry, i've got more than enough things planned to make up for it.." ::Tenshi let out louder cries, as if someone would hear him. The elf went and got a bucket of old, dirty, cold water and threw it on Tenshi, who flinched from the slight shock of it and he closed his eyes tightly, his lip beginning to quiver and his teeth starting to chatter. His lips were turning slightly blue from how cold he was. The elf now started whipping him as hard as he could, Tenshi letting out a cry with each crack of the whip. He kept going until Tenshi fell to the ground, crying loudly:: (C)
Ehn Grassclan: [Holy freak. X--x]
Queen Fan: "We're not done yet Tenshi.." ::The elf grabbed him by the hair and held him up, Tenshi putting his head back, not wanting him to rip his hair out. Tears streaming down his face:: "You know what, i haven't whipped your front in a while.." ::He smirked and brung to his feet and smacked his back against the wall, which Tenshi arched his back, puffing out his chest, trying to avoid contact to the splintery wall and as soon as he did that, the man started whipping more and more. Until Tenshi almost passed out:: "Hey, no going to sleep, that's a rule remember, i thought i taught you that before, no one is allowed to sleep here.." ::Tenshi eyes widened as he felt a new beating come on to him, punches and kicks. Tenshi just stared up at him, his eyes dulled:: "WHY ARE YOU LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT?
Queen Fan: (c)
Queen Fan: " ::The man grabbed up his whip and whipped hima good one across the face, so hard that Tenshi head shot to the side, his cheek splitting open and beginning to swell immediatly, pouring blood. He tried to keep the tears from touching it, knowing how much worse it would hurt::
Queen Fan: (grahn now i have to brb again GRAH >.<)
Ehn Grassclan: [KK.]
Ehn Grassclan: Nullia shrugged. "He won't listen to me. You're a great guy and really cute, yeah, but I don't like you like that. No offence." She closed her eyes, letting him touch her face. "But I just don't understand why he's so angry about it. I didn't DO anything to make him mad..."
Queen Fan: (yayness)
Ehn Grassclan: [=o]
Queen Fan: "I don't take offense to things like that...i don't honestly care if people like more or not. You can't see it?" ::He smiled to himself:: "He wants attention, someone that will listen to him, and won't make fun of him if he cries, he wants someone to care and he wantsa someone to know what happened, don't you understand?? Do you see it now?" ::He smiled to her more, thinking about Kuro, how sad it was that he had tried to bottle things up, only wanting to let someone everything he went through, though he tried to stay strong and put Tenshi before himself always, make sure he was helped before himself:: "It's quite sad...if you understand him...always putting others before himself.." ::He became quiet and lowered his head. Kuro sighed as he walked through the forest, getting sick of the (c)
Queen Fan: smell.:: "Damnit, why am i being sent here?" ::He walked out, seeing the small blue-ish gray house that had held him captive for so many years. It looked like it would fall over if someone even slightly nudged it. There was someone sitting on the two steps that led up to the door:: "Oh look who came back..." ::The person giggled evilly::
Ehn Grassclan: "I'm trying to listen to him, Lucifer." She sat up, running her fingers through her hair. She kept her eyes down, staring at the sheets. "I wish he'd just sit down and talk to me. I WILL listen to him, I want to. I would never make fun of him for anything. But he needs to care about himself too. Think I can go talk to him?" She looked to Lucifer sadly, sighing.
Queen Fan: "You still don't see it....this is why i set this up....i hope you both won't be angry at me when it's finished.." ::He got up from the bed and walked out of the room and then some sort of screen type thing shot up, showing her where Kuro was, and what was going on. Kuro stared to the elf sitting there, his eyes widened in fear. His breaths shallowed and he couldn't move, but the elf walked closer to him. All that could be heard was rain around them until Kuro's eyes turned into Tenshi and he quickly began running, screaming, and crying. The ground was turning quickly to mud. Tenshi's shoes got caught and he ripped his feet from the shoes along with his socks after a few more steps. This slowed him down a lot and he screamed louder everytime his foot got stuck, until the elf finally caught
Queen Fan: (c)
Queen Fan: up and smacked him to the ground and Tenshi began clawing at it as the elf drug him back to the house, his nails popping off in the mud, making them bleed as he began screaming bloody murder, He was so pale from fear. His heart felt like it was going to give out. The elf drug him back into the house and reshackled him:: "Looks like your mine, i was very bored without you, you know" Tenshi curled into a ball and cried loudly.:: "Looks like the mud has made you very dirsty...how about we give you a bath, hmm?" ::Tenshi eyes widened as he kicked and screamed, squirming and yelling, stuff that sounded like 'no!' and other types of objections, The cries blood curdling. The inside of the house was terrible, blood everywhere. Handprints of tiny children and the bloodied handprints of adults and(c
Queen Fan: teenagers. There was an axe sticking out from the wall, a tiny piece of flesh held against the wall by it, the missing tip of their ear. Tenshi tried to hold onto the wall as he was drug to the bathroom, leaving bloody fingerprints from where his nails had popped off. In the bathroom, there wasa single tub with a woman in it, full of her own blood. Her eyes cut out, blood trikling from her eye sockets like they were her tears. Her arm hung over the side, her hand laying limp on the floor. The floor seemed to havea coating of water and and blood. Tenshi was drug through it and thrown against the wall with a loud smack and he cried loudly, trying his hardest to press against the wall, as if it were going to protect him:: "Stand up...I SAID STAND UP!" ::He smacked him and TEnshi quickly (c)
Queen Fan: scrabmled to his feet:: "HANDS AGAINST THE WALL!" ::Tenshi did it quickly as well and the elf walked over ripping off his shirt and ran his fingers down Tenshi's cold scars on his back:: "Looks like you're overdue...don't worry, i've got more than enough things planned to make up for it.." ::Tenshi let out louder cries, as if someone would hear him. The elf went and got a bucket of old, dirty, cold water and threw it on Tenshi, who flinched from the slight shock of it and he closed his eyes tightly, his lip beginning to quiver and his teeth starting to chatter. His lips were turning slightly blue from how cold he was. The elf now started whipping him as hard as he could, Tenshi letting out a cry with each crack of the whip. He kept going until Tenshi fell to the ground, crying loudly:: (C)
Ehn Grassclan: [Holy freak. X--x]
Queen Fan: "We're not done yet Tenshi.." ::The elf grabbed him by the hair and held him up, Tenshi putting his head back, not wanting him to rip his hair out. Tears streaming down his face:: "You know what, i haven't whipped your front in a while.." ::He smirked and brung to his feet and smacked his back against the wall, which Tenshi arched his back, puffing out his chest, trying to avoid contact to the splintery wall and as soon as he did that, the man started whipping more and more. Until Tenshi almost passed out:: "Hey, no going to sleep, that's a rule remember, i thought i taught you that before, no one is allowed to sleep here.." ::Tenshi eyes widened as he felt a new beating come on to him, punches and kicks. Tenshi just stared up at him, his eyes dulled:: "WHY ARE YOU LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT?
Queen Fan: (c)
Queen Fan: " ::The man grabbed up his whip and whipped hima good one across the face, so hard that Tenshi head shot to the side, his cheek splitting open and beginning to swell immediatly, pouring blood. He tried to keep the tears from touching it, knowing how much worse it would hurt::
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 24th 2007 FloydTheTurtle Said : | |
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well, I'm not really a writer or a reader :) so I didn't really get it and... I don't really like to read such violent things :( but I did think it was exciting. good job |
| On August 23rd 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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urgh..i have teh same prob. amptone has..hmm..i thought this story was really confusing..thats just me tho..i get confuzzled super easily..and then i feel really dumb afterwards..lol :S i'll give u a point because i know ur a super good writer..based on ur story that i was reading before:) |
| On August 23rd 2007 amptone Said : | |
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I like it as well, I am horrible at reading stories...the A.D.D kicks in. But you write very well and you have interesting subjects. I never did write stories, so I can appreciate them. |
| On August 22nd 2007 Dctalkgirl1990 Said : | |
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I like it alot. Good job. I should really put up my stories but I'm going to make it into a book instead. I loved urs. YOu should do more |
| On August 22nd 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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cool, comment my newest story |
