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As Death Overcomes You

Short Created on 7-24-07 Views(70) Story Rating G

::He laid there limp on the bloody floor. Hies heart pounded in fear. He tried to hold back his tears.:: "Please...someone.." ::he tried to yell but only came out a soft pathetic whisper. He looked over to see his elfin brother. His bright blue eyes were wide. He was in shock. He was shaking. His brother was seeing him die infront of him and he had no power to control it:: "I'm sorry Tenshi.." ::HE coughed up blood saying it. He reached out his fingertips to Tenshi's face, smearing a bloody hand print on him.:: "Be strong.." ::He tried to laugh as he watched Tenshi seem to break down into his tiny little tears as if he were yelling at him 'Please don't go!' He tried to push himelf up but he fell back down. He ribs hurt badly from being kicked and whipped so much.His breath quickened, it seemed like he couldn't get enough air. His eyes became blood shot. His face was becoming pale as the blood was rushing out of his wounds:: "I'm so sorry Tenshi.." ::Tenshi's eyes widened more as they filled with tears. He became still, no movement, his eyes were dull and became a blank stare. Tenshi cried out:: "KURO!!! KURO!!" ::He started screaming like he was in a scary movie. :: "KURO!! COME BACK TO ME!!!" ::He fell to his side, the tears flowing like a river. Until he just stopped moving. A long time ago, he had made  a pact wit his brother..."When you heart stops...mine will stop with you.."::

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On September 24th 2007 queenislove Said :
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;alsdkjfa;lsdkfj that was so sad!!! D; ::sob::