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Lucifer exerpt froma roleplay with a friend |
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 Created on 7-14-07
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Una quensse: "well i think it freese the person solid in a kind of block of ice and they can be revived but the ice needs to be forced to melt. its all magical really" she waited for him to place the sword down and finaly getin the beg"its cold sence you put the fire out goof, so getin here and keep me warm"
Queen Fan: "Does it kill you???" ::that's all he wanted to know. He was so scared. But he didn't care. This was his brother. He didn't care if she hated him forever...he didn't care if his father would ever remember him again...he wanted his brother and that's all that mattered::
Una quensse: "yes i think it dose" she smiled a bit curious to him and then wiating keeping he covers open for him. wishing now she might have packed a bit more then just the sleeping abag, bed roll and tent*
Queen Fan: ::he got intot he sleeping bag and set the sword above his head. His breath quickened and tear made his eyes shine:: "I'm sorry.." :: He pulled her intoa kiss and stuck his hand down her pants and touched then pulled hi ahnd back out and slapped her across the face. He picked up the sword quickly and shoved it through his stomach. His breath became cold His tears froze. He screamed in pain. His lungs were freezing up and it hurt his chest.
Queen Fan: He started to shake until he stopped moving altogether. He lay there frozen solid....his eyes wide open, full of pain and fear. When he decided this was the way to do it...he didn't even know if that was gonig to take him to his brother...he wasn't sure of anything....he was a prayer that it did::
Una quensse: *she felt the kiss and his hand and actually was going to posistin herself to lay under him until he slapped her. then relizing he was not tenshi she was going to resist him and tell him to stop then she saw the sword"wha..no....NO!!" she sat up quickly and all she could do was watch the freesing process. gasing and turning her head away as his face froze up and he died."why..." she wispered to herself crawling out of the tent and looking to his father (name of father is? lol)
Queen Fan: (XD i never made a name for him...Frank? XD)
Una quensse: ok frank it is)
Queen Fan: ::He awoke again. But he was someplace completely different. He was still bleeding from his stomach, naturally in hell you have to live with what you've done. He was still freezing and it really hurt...it was punishment for your sins. He got up form the ground. He feltlike he could walk . He walked slowly, every step he made hurt his wound and the ice seem to shatter and grow deeper inside his chest.. He let out another scream. He cried out and fell ot his knees, he thought it would be better than this.:: "TENSHI" ::he yelled out hoping he would just come to him::
Una quensse: *she could not touch him without sufferinf frost bite only moved out and sat thereon the ground wings trimbling. "i have lost them both" she said then looked to frank. "i'm going home now" she stood up and looked him over one last time before sniffling and walking off. picking up her bag and leaving the tent and sleeping bag"take waht you want, bye frank"
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