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We walked back inside. Marcus started calling the info number for a window repairer. I realised I had to go home because I knew what my father was like.
“oii got to go home like now!”
“why? Cant you stay for a bit longer?” please?”
“na I cant I really need to go home”
“damn ok well get ya bag n sketch pad n meet me in da car k?”
“yea ok”
He walked out the front door and I walked an got my bag an sketch pad and walked out to the car and got in.
He started the car and pulled out onto the road.
“where do ya live?”
“12 buttercup drive”
“oh ok”
“yea... I’m sorry bout your window...”
“ itz aight its not your fault... that’s not the first time its happened... itz only cuz I’m black”
I didn’t respond, I couldn’t, no words could describe how bad I felt because I remembered about 3-4 months ago I was with josh when he done it. I remembered laughing about it to.
We drove in silence most of the way then we arrived at my house. It was a huge 2 story house with 9 bedrooms 3 bathrooms an 3 living rooms. I chose a bedroom on the ground so I could sneak out of the house easier . I got out of the car and looked through the window at Marcus. He had a sad an kinda confused look on his face. I knew why. I walked around to his side and kissed him good bye, which made him smile an incredible smile. I walked back around and waved through the window at him an he waved back. I smiled a very fake smile and walked up into my yard and through the front door.
“WHERE THA FUCK HAVE YOU BEEN ALL NIGHT YOU SLUT?!?!” yelled my father.
“i-i-i umm I was at a friend’s house because I fell unconscious at school an he didn’t know where I lived”
“BULL SHIT YOU LYING PIECE OF TRASH”
He grabbed me by my hair and dragged me into my room and repeatedly bashed me until I couldn’t move. He left me there lying on the floor in the middle of my room. I felt like dying or at least lying in Marcus’s arms where it was safe for me. This happened every time I came home late or disobeyed his orders. My father an josh were buddies, and that’s why josh started hitting me because my father said it was ok. I was only fucking 15 and get bashed almost every day and manage to still be the cheerleading captain.
I fell asleep lying there not moving. Then about 20 minutes later I heard light tapping on my window like a bird tapping on it or a tree branch (my window was also a sliding door type window). I slightly opened my sore eyes and looked out the window, it was Marcus . I tried sitting up but I couldn’t I fell back down.
Marcus saw and realised something bad had happened to me so he picked the lock on the door and ran in trying to be very quiet.
I felt Marcus softly shaking me, then I kinda woke up.
“babe what happened?”
“ughhh ii he-he -he I’m tired”
“ok”
He softly picked me up and put me on my bed and covered me with my blanket. He went over to my proper door and locked it so my mom an dad couldn’t come in, then he walked over to the sliding door an closed it an locked it and pulled the curtain across. He went onto the bed and laid next to me. He softly wrapped his arms around me so I was safe in his arms....
~!#$ ya kno da drill lol 20 rates n sum commentz till da next one lol so did ya like it? i think itz a lil short but itz da best i could do im tired n stuff ok well yer umm why dont yall sheck out a story called "typical emo kid" by fallen bloodxxx heres her link k <a href="http://testriffic.com/user/fallenbloodxxx.">fallenbloodxxx.</a><br> k sooo plzzz check it out thnxxx $#!~
Comments
| On September 7th 2008 killerx24 Said : | |
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wow thats realli sadd but its good |
| On June 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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i love it. except the whole dad and josh thing |
| On March 7th 2008 happymaddie009 Said : | |
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do u really need a home |
| On November 21st 2007 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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omg...that would suck so much. i feel horrible for her. he dad and her "ex" bf beat the shit outta her. |
| On November 5th 2007 lilangelofgod Said : | |
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i love this story and i cant beleieve what happend to her =( |
| On November 4th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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JOSH SUX so much, i hate evryone but her and marcus |
| On November 2nd 2007 KrystalToney Said : | |
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please keep me posted...thanks |
| On November 1st 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said : | |
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fuk im soooo sorri peepz i couldnt keep anyone posted cuz well i hav conjunctivitus or sumthin like that yer itz so hard to see da screen but ima try n write another story today for yall =] im so used to being called dumb n now i feel smart yay for me ima write a bigggg next part for yall xoxo |
| On November 1st 2007 thekoolkid13 Said : | |
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ohmuhjeez i loved it
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| On November 1st 2007 beccaboo073189 Said : | |
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this is sooo good, i luv your stories!!! marcus is soo sweet, i'd kick josh's ass, and i wouldn't live with a father like that. i really luv your writing!! keep me posted plz!! |
| On November 1st 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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i LOVE it. love love. i hate her stupid father and josh..but i love marcus =] |
| On November 1st 2007 beachparty57 Said : | |
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love it |
| On November 1st 2007 raetakeninluv1 Said : | |
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luv it |
| On November 1st 2007 crankdatshit94 Said : | |
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i would fight baq wit my dad if he was hittin me! but anywayzzz gud story!!!!! |
| On November 1st 2007 Artemisseven Said : | |
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Love it, plz plz keep me posted. |
| On November 1st 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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O_O i like it! |
| On November 1st 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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haah i like it!!!:Pi wish she wood get outa dat hell hole lol jash and her dad are sum fukin idiots cant wait for da next part tho i like marcus sooo much he iz sooo sweet!!!i love dis story keepz me posted agin plzzz |
| On November 1st 2007 meshia1011 Said : | |
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dis good keep me posted for the next one and her father is a fuckin ass wipe and so is josh her father and josh should go fuck them selves and leave her alone |
| On November 1st 2007 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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i liek it!! keep me posted |
| On November 1st 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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reallii kool, ii feel sad 4 her though, but plz keep me posted |
| On November 1st 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aw shes lucky she has marcus. keep me updated on these stories..theyre really good =] |
| On November 1st 2007 haylesrox Said : | |
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her father iz a fuckin loser just like josh. OMFG
marcus iz so sweet though
awesome story keep me posted plz |
| On November 1st 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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OH MY GOD!!! JOSH IS AN ASS AND SO IS HER FATHER!!! I HOPE SHE"S OK! AT LEAST SHE HAS MARCUS |


