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Romance Created on 9-30-07 Views(337) Story Rating G

I looked at him blankly.

 

“you wu wut?!?!”

 

“I told him we had sex, this was the only was I could get you back so I had to...”

 

I punched him on his jaw then I kicked him in the balls and then I kicked him once more in the ribs then I ran it the same direction that George went.

 

I ran/fast-walked to his room. When I got there I saw him packing his things.

 

I tried speaking but nothing would come out, then I took 2 steps towards him and he heard me and turned around.  His face had a disgusted look on it... a few words escaped from my mouth...

 

“it’s not true...please believe me.... please” I said in the saddest voice and a tear fell from my eye...

 

He turned around.

 

“don’t fukin lie to meh!..”

 

“im not, I wouldn’t he just doesn’t want us together...”

 

He turned around and finished packing his stuff. He turned around an started walking towards the door which was behind me. He was carrying a gym bag with his other clothes in it. He walked to the side of me and wrapped his arm around my waist... We walked out of the room and down 1..2..3..4 corridors until we got outside. I realised his car wasn’t here someone drove it back to his house after the party. Then George got a piece of metal out of his bag, it was long and thin and it looked like it had a hook thingy at the end of it.

 

“which one’s Travis’s car?”

 

“uhh that Subaru there..”

 

“iigh wait here a minute”

 

“k”

 

He walked over to the Subaru an slid the piece of metal down the driver side door an then he opened the door. Within 30 seconds he was driving the car towards me, he drove the car up right next to me and opened the passenger side door and I got in. He smiled... he’s smile was so gorgeous. I smiled back.

 

“so where are we goin?”

 

“well I can get money for diz car so we goin to sell it an im thinkin me n you goin to da movies not sure yet tho”

 

It was about 5pm on Sunday now. I started to wounder where an I going to stay tonight because im not going home an im sure George starts work (slanging) at bout 11pm. We pulled into a drive-way next to a big warehouse. A guy bout 25-26 years old came out an George got out. They started talking an then George walked back to the car.

 

“ey we gota go in another car k”

 

“yea aight”

 

I got out the car and the other guy got in an drove it into the warehouse. Me an George walked into the huge warehouse after him an then I was in amazement a chop shop thousands of cars everywhere, sparks were flying I couldn’t believe what I was seeing, the most beautiful car was shining right in front of me. A h2 hummer gawd it was HOTT!! It was black with gold trim and it had a brand new body kit.

 

“ya like it?”

 

“wut?”

 

“Tha hummer”

 

“Hella yea!”

 

“Well that ma new ride”

 

“No fukin way!”

 

“Yea Omar owed me”

 

“Dang how much he owe you like $200.000....”

 

“Na I just took care of sum business fo him”

 

So we got in the hummer an drove out the warehouse an down a couple of blocks till we got to Luna park which was an amusement park right on the beach

 

(hey peepz thnx for readin ma story i've decided when i get 10 comments an 10 ratings i will post numba 14 ok thnx oh an if u like this story you should check out ma friend haylesrox story called awwwww so cute itz a gud story k thnx!!)

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On October 23rd 2007 BayAreaGirl707 Said :
BayAreaGirl707 dats funny he stole her exboyfriends car lol
On October 2nd 2007 Cheyenne1023 Said :
Cheyenne1023 I Loved It Keep Writing Lol My Deddeh Have A Hummer His Is More Like A Red Tho Well Ill Read Da Next One
On October 2nd 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 Omg I'm lovin it!
On October 2nd 2007 mandamay91 Said :
mandamay91 sorry i wasn't able to comment sooner,it's just that I"ve been busy with school && all. But yeah, I absolutely love the story.
On October 2nd 2007 punkgurl989 Said :
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omg it is ssssoooo good well write more ppplllzzzz
On October 1st 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH PLZZZ KEEP ME POSTED FO DA NEXT 1!!!LOVIN IT 100%
On October 1st 2007 haylesrox Said :
haylesrox i lurved it. i wish i had the hummer. pleeeeeeeeeez write the next one coz this seris is awesome.
On October 1st 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 good
On September 30th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 I LUHV IT & THNX 4 ASKIN PEOPLE 2 CHECK OUT MI STORY "LOVE", JUS 4 U I'M GONNA START TYPIN IT RITE NOW...
On September 30th 2007 beachparty57 Said :
beachparty57 I love it!!!! Keep me posted!!!
On September 30th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :
qosdfyjvwefayv yo yo yo everyone plz check out aliyah1994's story love plzz i want tha next part n she not postin it till she gets more comments an rates plzzz im dieing here
On September 30th 2007 flirtybabe2250 Said :
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omg. i love it. keep me posted please.
On September 30th 2007 metal4lifebaby Said :
metal4lifebaby loved it. keep me posted plz.
On September 30th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 luved it!
On September 30th 2007 Nyyia Said :
Nyyia i liked it and i wish i was her in that hummer right bout now