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Creative Created on 9-20-07 Views(375) Story Rating G

OK SO I THOUGHT I SHOULD TELL EVERYONE IN DIZ STORY SUM STUFF DIDNT REALLI HAPPEN TO ME BUT SUM STUFF DID. THE CHARACTER GEORGE IZ REAL THATS THE GUY ON THE FRONT COVER OF THE STORY THE CHARACTER JEWLS IS SUPOSED TO B ME BUT DATS NOT MY NAME =P IN REAL GEORGE WAS SHOT AN DIED =’( I WAS HIS GIRLFRIEND AT THE TIME BUT I WASNT THERE. HE REALLI DID WANT TO B A RAPPER INFACT IF U GO ON MY MYSPACE U CAN LISTEN TO ONE OF HIZ SONGS AN THE WAY DAT HE ASKED JEWLS OUT IN THE STORY IS DA SAME IN REAL. HE WAS SOO SWEET AS WELL!!

  

I just laid in his arms, i was so comfortable, Then Hayley ran in with my phone ringing.

 


“its your mom!!!”

 

I sat up on the bed an grabbed the phone from her.

 

“fuk wut am i going to say?”

 

I answered the phone...


“WHERE ARE YOU!!!?!?”

 

“uhh im at the hospital”

 

“and why are you at the hospital”

 

“ i have to go ill be home later i cant use cell phones in the hospital”

 

I hung up the phone. George looked at me worried...

 

“she’s pretty angry...”

 

“ i no babe you should probably go...home” he said like it was killing him to say.

 

“no they don’t own me I’ll go home when i feel like going”

 

“But what about me I got to go home...”

 

“Oh well you can go just don’t tell them where you’ve been ok please you know what they will do to us if they knew”

 

“Yea ok”

 

So she left to go to my house to get her stuff...  I laid back down a relaxed. I leaned over nearly on George kissing him on his lips when.... my parents walked in....

 

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING JEWLS!!!!”Yelled her father


“ OH wut are you doing here?”Jewls said

 

“ I was just about to ask you the same thing!” said her mother

 

“uhhh itz not what it looks like... this is uhh...”

 

“that’s George I know but what do you think you are doing on top of him.... no don’t answer that you’re coming home with us”

 

My dad pulled me off the bed I stared to try an kick him but it was no use. George couldn’t help me because he was in too much pain so I stoped fighting my dad an left the hospital.

 

We got home an my dad pretty much dragged me up stairs into my room an locked the door. I just laughed at him because I knew i could get out the window. So i walked straight over to my window an climbed out but i had realised he took down the ladder that i had up there. I just sat out on the roof an started to cry. I knew they would never let me see George but i loved him so much i had been denying it for so long but i knew i did love him an he loved me. I laid on my bed an started to cry again my heart felt like it had been ripped out of my chest an was being dissected in front of m. It hurt real bad.... there was no way i could see him then i felt my cell phone ringing....

 

 

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On June 3rd 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 keep ur head up sorri bout wat happened but her dad was wrong 4 draggin her
On June 2nd 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess ohhh im sorry that must have been heartbreaking =[
On October 23rd 2007 BayAreaGirl707 Said :
BayAreaGirl707 i cant belive he died i'm so srry
On September 21st 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 AWWWWWWWW IM SORRY BOUT WUT REALLY HAPPENED AND I LOVE DA STORY BUT AGIN SORRY WUT HAPPENED TO DA REAL GEORGE I FEEL FOR YA :/
On September 21st 2007 Artemisseven Said :
Artemisseven you have to write more! i loved it. plz keep me posted! tnks
On September 20th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz awww. im so sorry about george. =( the real george, that is. and the fake one of course. aww. *cyber hug* well, i love the story, doll. keep me posted?
On September 20th 2007 Spikecollecter Said :
Spikecollecter D; Poor George,I'm sorry dear.But still,it's a nice story
On September 20th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 im so sorry about wat happened! hope u r ok...loved this part!
On September 20th 2007 lenea92 Said :
lenea92 yo dis story iz mad hot!.....oh yea and dats mad sad wa happened 2 george in real life..i feel 4 u
On September 20th 2007 haylesrox Said :
haylesrox Awwwwwwwww so sad. but ur story is kool. so sad dats its true but i already know that. keep writing. ur stories are awesome. keep me posted
On September 20th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 i'm soooooo sorry to hear about your boyfriend. dis story is really good. plz continue to keep me posted. and again i'm so sorry about ur boyfriend. luhv ya!!!!
On September 20th 2007 metal4lifebaby Said :
metal4lifebaby dis iz so sad. keep me posted plz
On September 20th 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 aww so sad
On September 20th 2007 lilangelofgod Said :
lilangelofgod GREAT story.............keep me posted this is really sad that its true
On September 20th 2007 punkgurl989 Said :
my picture
omfg i cant bleave it u have got to erite more ppppppplllzzzzzzz
On September 20th 2007 Nyyia Said :
Nyyia i hope so gets to see george again. i really loved it and im sorry about what happened to ur boyfriend. can u keep me posted