Created By
Rate this Story
Embed
|
+
14
|
so it be part 5!!!!! ZOMG! ya its part 5! |
|
+
10
|
so it be PART 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
|
+
15
|
so it be part 3!!!!!! |
|
+
17
|
so it be. part 2!!!!! |
|
+
10
|
so it be (revised) |
|
+
7
|
so it be |
|
+
12
|
The Vampire House |
|
so it be part 5!!!!! ZOMG! ya its part 5!
|
I spun around to face the intruder
There standing in my own room was my ex-boyfriend, Nick, holding the one who truly loved me
“Nick what do you want” I said trying to cover myself
“Oh come on allie you know exactly what I want”
“Let him go nick!”
“Ha, I’ll let him go as soon as you give me the money you owe me”
“I don’t have your damn money!”
“Allie what is this guy talking about” gray said with a dumbfounded look on his face
“Your pretty little girlfriend here owes me a lot of money for those pills she’s been taking, don’t you sweetie” moving the knife closer to grays neck
“I’m not your sweetie and I hate you! Let go of gray now!” I screamed hitting nick with all my might
“Like your little punches can hurt me” he turned away from gray and hit me once across the face. “How did you like that you little bitch!” I sunk to the floor crying
“Get up you whore! “I felt a sharp pain in my side, and nick was standing over me kicking me, the smile on his face made me sick, he was getting pleasure from hurting me. I could feel the cold ground below me and blood trickling from my side, but I wasn't bleeding. Looking at my side, I realized that it wasn’t my blood. Gray was lying next to me, bleeding, from everywhere. I pulled my self over to him and held him.
“Mom” I tried calling for her but the only sound that came out was a crackle. With all my strength, I screamed.
I counted the steps as she walked up them, all 17, every step she took was one less second gray had to live. She opened the door and I can only imagine what she saw.
Me collapsed on the floor, without a shirt, scars showing, covered in blood, that wasn’t my own. And gray, bleeding from his neck and sides, lying next to me, with a bloody knife next to him.
After that, I blacked out and woke in the hospital, alone, bruise covered and patches of white cloth over my body where my scares were. There was a note on the table next to my bed, I slowly picked it up, unfolded it, and read.
Ill be back for you
“Where’s gray!” I screamed without thinking. “Gray! Are you ok!” I started crying uncontrollably. A nurse ran in to my room and tried to calm me down.
“Darling I have to tell you something about your friend gray……………
Comments
| On July 16th 2008 texasbabygirls Said : | |
|
|
omg please keep me posted.this is really good. |
| On May 25th 2008 1emoinkentcity Said : | |
|
|
kmp plz |
| On December 13th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said : | |
|
|
omg!!! he cant be dead...keep me posted plz hun...thanx ~*~Dava~*~ |
| On December 12th 2007 guitarmissy Said : | |
|
|
Keeeeeppp meeeeee posteddddddddddddd ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!! |
| On December 12th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
|
|
fuck. keep me posted. |
| On December 11th 2007 iiamthathero Said : | |
|
|
omg omg omg omg omg!!!
he can not be dead!
Augh!!!!
nooooo |
| On December 11th 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
|
|
omgomgomgomg!!! nooo he CANNOT be dead!! |
| On December 11th 2007 pure0wn23 Said : | |
|
|
so?? how is it? i hope its ok, ive been sick the last couple of days and so here is a story.. :):P |


