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+ 2	who? [part 2]
+ 7	who?
+ 6	glass heart
+ 5	Love
+ 7	i didnt mean to
+ 3	my invisable death

one day i was in my room.my parents were throughing some kind of an adult party so i wasnt aloud to go down stares unless its an emergency. so i was reading in my bed with all the lights off and lit candles.i was pretty relaxed untill i herd this loud thumping i thought it was my parents so i ignored it.a few minutes later i herd it again but louder so agian i ignored it.then i herd it agian by then i was realy anoyed so i opened opened my door and i didnt want to go down three flites of stairs (cuz we live in a mansion) so i yelled at the top of my lungs''could you be quite please!!!'' a few minutes later i herd it again.this time it was so loud it was ringing in my ear. so i walked down 1 flite of stares and b4 i could say anything i saw a tall figure with a dripping injection needle in its hand.i tried to go around it but it grabed me tight it jamed the needle in my arm then disappeared.it stung for awile then it faded.about a half an hour later my arm iched realy bad. i put my book down to go to my bathroom to put water on it but when i looked at my arm there was a big chunk missing and blood gushing out i suddenly felt a hard stab in my throat. i ran to my bathroom to look at it and a big chunk was missing there to so i ran as fast as i could down stares i was balling i could barelly breath when i got down stares i spoted my mom and hurried over to her and shuved my arm in her face and pionted to my neck in horror and she just kept talking i shook her sholders as hard as i could nothing nobody even glanced at me. ''HELLO.............HELP ME ....ANYBODY...PLEASE'' by then my face was numb from all the crying and my arm was still gushing and so was my neck i couldnt breeth then suddenly every thing froze and that same figure that had the needle appeared and said in the most eary voice your dead! ''NO NO NO'' he started laughing i was waiting for the bright light but no nothing happened ''WHATS GOING ON?WHY AM I NOT IN HEAVEN OR HELL OR ANY WHERE?'' your going to roam the earth for ever with all the pain and suffering ''NOOOOOOOOOOOO'' i fainted and i woke up  in a blank space no color no nothing.

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