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Love

Romance Created on 8-19-07 Views(62) Story Rating G

as nicole walks home with her best friend,kyle she thinks about her love for him and how its been a secret since they met in 2nd grade its been taring at her heart and every night after kyle walked her home from school she would cry herself to sleep and it hurts now to even look at him ''kyle......umm......'' studders nicole ''what is it?''she closes her eyes gently ''its been taring my heart not to tell you that i love you'' she opens her eyes to him giving her the same confuised look he gave her when they met ''i love you too'' kyle answers ''i always have,nicole i was just worried you didnt feel the same'' ''i do'' he looked at her and she felt as if her heart were drownding in his eyes but couldn't wouldn't fight it for once in there friendship they were speachless finaly she broke the silence ''well i gotta go i'll see you tomorrow'' she turned and headed for her door ''wait'' he gentaly grabed her shoulders and turned her around and kissed her she was speachless ''see you tomorrow'' he said then walked twards his house for once since 2nd grade she didnt cry or frown or anything the craks in her heart were finaly gone for once she was...happy

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On August 20th 2007 psche Said :
psche nice plot i like it =]
On August 19th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 Try to seperate the sentences with punctuations. It was kind of confusing to read and had a few grammar errors, but it was good.
On August 19th 2007 pruetta Said :
pruetta i just wrote it