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Rivers of thought

Creative Created on 10-1-07 Views(191) Story Rating G

The rain continued to fall rythmacly against the glass of the window, exploding when the drops finally reached their first real destination. after that explosion that first burst of energy at least three different paths would erupt from that one single drop.

I always loved watching rain, the way it entered into our world with haste, how it seemed to erupt with life apon contact, but most of all I loved the paths it would create, not one single path but multiple ones, twisting and turning unknown as to where life would take it. But always ending up together pooling together re united again. then it would rest together not as rain...... but as water.

It was a cold, bleak saturday morning, I always hated saturdays, I never knew wich new man I would  see sitting at the kitchen table. Or worse if my mother hadnt found a man I would have to put up with her agrivated temprement. Either way I hatered saturday.

  

 

 

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On November 23rd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 wow i love it
On October 22nd 2007 trev88m Said :
trev88m i love this, its so descriptive and the way you see things is so different to other people and it is wonderful
On October 12th 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb love this story!
On October 3rd 2007 usher13a Said :
usher13a woa, I love it
On October 1st 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle Wowzas keep me posted please???
On October 1st 2007 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen looks good. please keep me posted