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Broken Smiles Part 1

Romance Created on 5-22-07 Views(317) Story Rating G

 ***Author's Note***
Keep in mind that I've never written a story like this before, so it's not the best. I hope it's not the worst, though. Anyway, same character names. I always use those, though. It's just a way to keep out of finding new names. :D

Aria’s P.O.V.
    My skin shone a pale white and my brown hair contrasted greatly against my ice blue eyes.
    “I didn’t think you had the guts to show up.” I said sadly.
    “I didn’t think I did either.” Jack’s tan exterior looked frighteningly beautiful against the moonlight. “Aria, it’s not fair to be so far apart for so long.”
    “It’s not, I know… Jack, maybe this is,” I hated to say, “It.”
    “Maybe you’re right.” I heard from below my window. “I guess I’ll go home, then.”
    “Goodbye Jack.”
    “Goodbye Aria.”

Jack’s P.O.V.
    I’ve been left. I loved her and she left. I was her best friend and she was mine. Aria’s house is far in the distance now. We’re separated by 45 miles of nothing. In the distance, people are in love, and I sit here, poor me, singing with my Texas drawl, a tune by Keith Urban. I feel something warm slide down my cheek and find myself crying. Sixteen year old boys don’t cry.
    The alarm drives me mad as I search, desperately for the snooze button. I miss sleeping in. I miss being loved. I miss being Jack AND Aria. Now I’m just Jack. Just me. I look on the wall and see all of my old pictures. Some of me playing baseball, others of friends that are off to college and there, right in the middle. It’s her. She’s so beautiful. I see Aria’s smile and the picture and remember that day like no other. She is so beautiful.

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On August 3rd 2007 stubishead Said :
stubishead its so sweet. i like your writing.
On July 16th 2007 DeanCentricGal Said :
DeanCentricGal aw, that's so sad. please keep me updated :]
On July 15th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 call me a softy but thats sad .. i like it
On June 27th 2007 jdwluver Said :
jdwluver great so far!
On June 2nd 2007 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool That was great. Well I will read up to part 4 now TTY on those ones also.
On May 26th 2007 prettyJennie1 Said :
prettyJennie1 If you'd like me to notify you as to when the next part comes out, please leave a comment.
On May 22nd 2007 dbend2001 Said :
dbend2001 Really good abstract