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Broken Smiles Part 15

Romance Created on 8-2-07 Views(149) Story Rating G

Part 15
Aria’s P.O.V.
    I can’t believe he just fucking called me Annie!
    “I meant Ar, sorry, I was just thinking about what you told me.”
    “WHATEVER JACK!” I yell. I can’t believe this. It must be a nightmare. “Please, just leave…” I cry.
    “Okay Aria. But please, just listen…” he pauses for what seems like an eternity. I just want him out! “I love you with all of my heart Aria. And if I hurt you, I’m sorry. If you don’t take me back, I understand. But never think that I don’t love you, because I always will.”
    “Goodbye Jack.” I say.
    “Bye.”
    Ugh, that fag bastard piece of shit good for nothing…!!! Ugh… Okay, so now I need to figure out what to do. I have energy. I want to have fun without him. Megan! I’ll call Megan!
    *ring*… *ring* … “Hello?” Megan answered!
    “Megan… It’s Aria. Can we hang out?” She can tell I’m crying. I know she can.
    “Ar, you’re crying.. What’s wrong?!”
    “Megs, just come over please?” I’m desperate.
    “Of course I’ll come over Aria. Is anybody at your house to let me in?”
    “The butler, Jim is here.” I reply.
    “Alright, Ar. I’ll be there in about 5 minutes. You’re in your room, right?”
    “Yup.” I say and with that she hangs up.
    Five minutes later, Megan is bouncing up and down in my room ready to knock Jack to the ground at any second.
    “Let me sock ‘im!” Megan yells with her crazy English accent.
    “Megs! Chill! It’s nothing!” I say. “I want to have fun tonight… Ready to hit the town?”
    “Oooh, payback’s a bitch!” Megan seems ready to jump out of her pants.
    “Payback’s a bitch.” I agree.

Jack’s P.O.V.
    Wow. I’m so retarded. Now I only have one girl to play around with. But what if Aria tells Annie? What if there’s nobody? Fuck. How could I have let her find out about Anita? How could I even call her Annie?! I’m so stupid!
    I pull up to Anita’s house and knock on the front door. I smile as I see Anita’s curly blonde hair bouncing along with her super large chest. She opens the door slowly, her brown eyes blinking up at me.
    “Hey baby.” I say with the deepest voice I could muster.
    “Hi Jack.” She says kissing me deeply.
    “How are you?” I ask as our lips part.
    “Great,” She smiles. “And you?”
    “Never been better.” I lie.
    “So are you ready to go to the movies?” She says, grabbing her purse and giving me a gigantic smile.
    “Of course!” I can’t wait. Maybe she’ll finally have sex with me in the theatre. “I am if you are.”
    “Duh!” She laughs.
    “Let’s go to my car then.” As I walk her out to my car door, I start to think. This is a big thing for me, because I don’t think too much. “Hey Annie?”
    “Yes Jack?”
    “How much do you love me?” She smiles.
    “I love you more than anything in the world.” Thank God.
    “What if something bad were to happen?” I hope she doesn’t say something stupid.
    “Like if you cheated on me?” She knows. Oh God, I think she knows.
    “Well… something like that. Not that anything is going bad. I’m just talking hypothetically.” I hope I don’t sound like a loser.
    “Then I’d dump you like a dump truck dumps rocks.”
    “That’s what I thought.” CRAP.

 

******************Author's Note:***********************

So I'm not sure how long to continue Broken Smiles. The ratings just aren't what I think they should be. I think I'll probably write one more chapter unless my ratings increase dramatically. So yeah, I hope ya'll enjoyed it! My next story will be titled Big Love In A Small Town.

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On August 3rd 2007 kornkult Said :
kornkult Very good!!!!
On August 3rd 2007 stubishead Said :
stubishead what an asshole! lol. good story though. keep me posted. ^^
On August 2nd 2007 HSandyI Said :
HSandyI Arg! Jack is such an idiot... doesnt he kno that when hes playing girls he has to avoid names... only calling them honey and baby and that... oh, but i love the story