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Romance Created on 6-4-08 Views(124) Story Rating G

Months and months have passed by. The same thing happens everyday at school. Its always a drag. It's almost as if u can exactly predict whats happening in my life. Untill spring came.

Things have been sort of brightening up now that its spring. Emilio broke up with his girlfriend last month and Emily has stopped bugging me about how they make such a cute couple. So instead of keeping you all waiting let me start my story.

I was walking to to my friend Layla's house (she's my new friend she just moved into the same house Jackie used to live in. We became good friends.) so we could go walking to school together. Now you see Layla nows my whole story about Emilio and has been encourging me to go up to him and just make casual conversation. I couldn't though. I got to the steps of Layla's house and rang the doorbell. Soon the door opened and out she came.

"Hey Rose" Layla said

"Hey" I said

"So are you going to do it today" Layla asked

"Do what," I asked not knowing hat she was talking about

"Talk to Emilio duh." layla exclaimed

Before I could reply she yelled out "Look here is your chance. He's walking right there say hi"

I looked across and there he was walking by. Before I could say hi or anything at all he looked by me and gave me huge grin and said "Hey"

I was in shock. He was actually talking to me. After all those months he was actually talking to me. Layla nuged me and than I realize i hadn't replied back.

"hi" I said a bit to queitly I hope he heard me.

Now I no just a hi is not much but it gets better.

I was in my first period class working on a project. I was working and everything was quiet than someone just taped on my shoulder. I looked back and there was Emilio.

"Hey Rose sorry to bother you but I need a little advice on my project" He said

"Sure i'll help you " I said smiling

Mostly throughout school everything was going greta. To bad it was Friday because I was really looking forward to Monday. Soon enough school was over I got home and I sat on the computer.

Instant message from Emily my computer read.

"Oh no this can't be good" I thought to myself

 

Oh cliffhanger. Rate and comment for the next one and you will find out what the instant message says. Thanks for reading!

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