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Betrayed Love part 1
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"So whats been going on in your life" asked Kim curious to know
"Oh nothing really. I had a fiance" said Nick
"Really?" Kim asked a bit sad
"Yes but she died in a car accident" Nick said forming tears in his eyes.
"Oh Nick I am so sorry" said kim putting her hand on his
"Its ok i'll be ok" said Nick wipping away his tears
There was an akward moment of silence until Nick spoke up.
Kim there's something i've been wanting to tell you since we were little" said Nick
"Whats is it" Kim asked a bit confused
"I love you" Nick blurted out
Kim opened her mouth and just sat there.
"Um Kim are you still there" asked Nick
"oh a yeah" said Kim getting back to reality
"Well" said Nick
"oh um yeah" Kim said clearing her throat "You know how many years I have waited for you to say that" Kim said smiling
Nick softly laughed. "I'll take that as a I love you too"
3 months later
"Nick where are we going" asked Kim
"You'll see" said Nick
He took her to the beach.
"Now look up" he told her
Kim looked up and there written in the sky was a question. It said Kim will you marry me?
Kim looked doen and there was Nick kneling down on one knee holding a ring with a big diamond in the middle.
Like I said sorry if its kinda boring but its only like the first three chapters. so what do you think Kim is gonna say yes or no. Please rate and comment.
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| On February 28th 2008 Harumi13 Said : | |
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sweeeett^^!!!!please keep me posted i love it^^ |
| On February 25th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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keep me posteed! |
| On February 24th 2008 fruitymangopea Said : | |
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awww cute |
| On February 22nd 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On February 22nd 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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aww so sweet!! kmp plz! |
| On February 22nd 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said : | |
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wowww... |
| On February 22nd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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aww... cute! Please KMP |
| On February 22nd 2008 cashy31196 Said : | |
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whoa... KMP plz |
| On February 21st 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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That's adorable! I wish I was that lucky with girls... Keep me posted! |
| On February 21st 2008 rumcake2daend Said : | |
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awww!!!! this is sweet!!! |


