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Betrayed Love part 1

Romance Created on 2-21-08 Views(128) Story Rating G

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"So whats been going on in your life" asked Kim curious to know

"Oh nothing really. I had a fiance" said Nick

"Really?" Kim asked a bit sad

"Yes but she died in a car accident" Nick said forming tears in his eyes.

"Oh Nick I am so sorry" said kim putting her hand on his

"Its ok i'll be ok" said Nick wipping away his tears

There was an akward moment of silence until Nick spoke up.

Kim there's something i've been wanting to tell you since we were little" said Nick

"Whats is it" Kim asked a bit confused

"I love you" Nick blurted out

Kim opened her mouth and just sat there.

"Um Kim are you still there" asked Nick

"oh a yeah" said Kim getting back to reality

"Well" said Nick

"oh um yeah" Kim said clearing her throat "You know how many years I have waited for you to say that"  Kim said smiling

Nick softly laughed. "I'll take that as a I love you too"

3 months later

"Nick where are we going" asked Kim

"You'll see" said Nick

He took her to the beach.

"Now look up" he told her

Kim looked up and there written in the sky was a question. It said Kim will you marry me?

 Kim looked doen and there was Nick kneling down on one knee holding a ring with a big diamond in the middle.

 

Like I said sorry if its kinda boring but its only like the first three chapters. so what do you think Kim is gonna say yes or no. Please rate and comment.

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On February 28th 2008 Harumi13 Said :
Harumi13 sweeeett^^!!!!please keep me posted i love it^^
On February 25th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz keep me posteed!
On February 24th 2008 fruitymangopea Said :
fruitymangopea awww cute
On February 22nd 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmpp
On February 22nd 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 aww so sweet!! kmp plz!
On February 22nd 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said :
omfgusuck12345 wowww...
On February 22nd 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 aww... cute! Please KMP
On February 22nd 2008 cashy31196 Said :
cashy31196 whoa... KMP plz
On February 21st 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 That's adorable! I wish I was that lucky with girls... Keep me posted!
On February 21st 2008 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend awww!!!! this is sweet!!!